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Love, It Hurts So Good CH: 1 University Blues
🕑 Added 2018-10-01 20:35:38 +0000 UTC Things are pretty normal for our protagnist Ethan. He's a second year university student living in a crappy studio apartment. He thinks that when he wakes up, his day will be like any other. That is, until someone very special walks into his life.I would love feedback in the comments (that are clean) and if there are ways I could have improved or should improve for next time!
Comments
Frostylurv
Idk if you've done more of these since but i hope this helps if you haven't. Leave a few seconds space between the title and the start of the story so that people can "settle in a bit" as it were. I think your cadence was a little fast in some parts compared to others but a pleasant experience overall none the less.
Osaro
You have a very pleasant voice for narration it is very soothing. I would need to hear more of the story to know if it would be captivating.
