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Chapter 134 - Preparations

🕑 Added 2019-05-14 21:22:11 +0000 UTC

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Thank you, fixed that. Also thanks for the feedback. I might still do the cut, cause I think I can do better. If it urns out worse, I can always just put the chapter back in, right?

:D Thank you. Still, I always strive to do better. I might still replace the chapter, though that decision is postponed due to a lack of time.

yeah i dont mind how the chapters are so far they are great imo so far

Torphin

Thanks for the chapter! Personally, I thought the last chapter was fine--but if you have a vision for a better way to introduce the information, I say go for it. On a different note, you may want to remove the "Corco" from the following sentence (from this chapter): "As they marched along, Corco a group of fresh recruits jogged past, sweat and gasps abound. "


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