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Chapter 235 - In Search of a Future

🕑 Added 2020-01-31 16:27:04 +0000 UTC

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Part of the problem is that they're old nobles from the north, so they're already using very stiff language, without contractions etc. That only gets worse when they have to deliver exposition. I'll try to be more careful/clever with my exposition in the future though.

I really like revisiting these characters while also giving us another perspective of the societal/political changes. Hopefully "The Adventures of Sawo the Great and Tawo the Strong" will continue throughout the series. Dialouge feels slightly stiff/expository but I'm not quite sure how you would improve that. Love the chap!


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