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How about some Werewolf?

🕑 Added 2019-03-25 00:52:16 +0000 UTC

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phillip lynes

Here's a thought I had Extracurricular Activities werewolf style

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Dan Away

Well written and imaginative short story. Looking forward to your next piece!

CosmicNoodle

Another fantastic short story! Keep them coming!

Myneghon

Honestly loved both this and the Minotaur story. You managed to make me feel a lot of empathy for the protagonists and the love scenes had me drooling all over the keyboard. I was left wanting more and with a lot of unanswered questions at the end of both, which is always a good sign of a compelling narrative. If you were looking for some constructive criticism, I would say the pacing is a rather brisk and the world-building is a bit too vague to provide the story a rock solid foundation, but this is understandable to prevent a short story turning into a novella. Please keep up the excellent work, the writing and characterisation is one of the things that makes Extracurricular Activities really a hit with me.

DyneWulf

Perma werewolf! I don't have any other reasoning, really x3

牛大聖

I have a question though, how come this variety of werewolves don't change back into their human forms after the night is over or when there isn't a full moon?

DyneWulf

Already a step ahead, cause that's exactly what I'm going with this time ;3 Diving into a dragon!

DyneWulf

Thank you as well!

DyneWulf

Could you point out any certain spots with that? I did catch a few of them on reading the story before I posted it, so seeing ones I missed would be good for me to learn from. Bahaha, yeah. I might have a little bias with the monster being on top... I can't help myself!

DyneWulf

He has to come back! (I mean, I can't lie, he totally would, cause they gotta life happily together)

DyneWulf

You're only -slightly- biased towards the werewolves ;3 I wrote the world vague enough to let people imagine what they want, but tried to leave enough detail to still paint a setting. I prefer werewolves being sane too. Leaves more fun to be had!

I'm enjoying these short stories Minotaurs and werewolves are some of my favorite mythical creatures. If you don't have an idea for your next story WolfBite how about a Dragon I like to see what kind of story you can do with that, just throwing out ideas for ya you can do what you want. Also these first two shorts deserve a second part they end on a cliffhanger just a thought to keep in mind for the future.

It was a very pleasant read, nothing like a werewolf husband. Thank you.

Serph

I really enjoyed the story, my only complaint comes from the switch in perspectives. I felt unsure frequently about who I was in the story due to the switching of characters having no obvious transition. Other than that though it kept me engrossed the entire time. It would be nice to see a role reversal for your next story. The monster topping is fun, but it’d be nice to see the human top.

Timothy

Yass!!! Loved the story, need to read more. I'm with Daryl in the whole I won't be sleeping until my husband returned hehe.

Gil

A werewolf tale! Somewhat biased towards those and once again you created a unique and interesting world that for some reason made me imagine a steam punk world similar to WoW. Advanced yet still knights and swords etc. Love the werewolf take on giving him his sanity back and reclaiming his life rather than being a monster controlled and lost to his new self.

DyneWulf

Thanks for the feedback! One of the things I tend to worry about when I write is whether I'm saying too much or too little, moving too fast or too slow, so I'm hunting for that balance. I'll try to be more mindful of that as I move into the next story!

Adam Even

While the overall story was good and I liked the characters, some moments aren't given the set up, time and appropriate atmosphere to really drive the story home. The main issue I think is we're being told a lot, but shown little, like the werewulf husband is a complete surprise, but not in a really good way. And the build up to the reveal was so quick, no suspense, or real mystery, just having them ask him if he's his husband and him saying yes doesn't invoke disbelief, I was just left thinking wait he had a husband? I liked the story, but I was left a little dissatisfied with how it was told. But I know that you can do better with time and I'd love to see where this is going

DyneWulf

Ah! Well, thank you for that! I'm glad that you've found it worthy. That means a lot to me!

DyneWulf

Seems a couple of you guys want a part too... More werewolves

DyneWulf

I do want to do more were the werewoofs...

DyneWulf

Thank you!

DyneWulf

Yeah, a lot of it was written as such. I wasn't really aware of it most of the time, but I'd prefer to write in a more active voice, so it'll be one of those things I work on!

Was pleasantly surprised that you posted another short story! These stories and the updates for the Extracurricular Activities made it worth my while in this Patreon. Thanks for the short stories!

Nox

Aww, what a wonderful cute story Dyne! I hope you make a pt 2 :)

Mr_Apples6747

the story was overall really well written and even though all books end with a cliff hanger, I want to find out what happens in this one :(((

Mr_Apples6747

honestly i want a part two already

phillip lynes

werewolf dating game could be fun and great story and great art to go with

Macavity1103

Yet another super cute story:D I really enjoy these! Good work

牛大聖

This is even better than the last one. A bit sad at the beginning; Fantasy setting yes, but the characters somehow make you empathise with them. Correct me if I'm mistaken but the vast majority of the story seems to be written in a passive voice?