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Update 1.181 with Gallery

🕑 Added 2024-11-16 18:03:55 +0000 UTC

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Bobby Thornbody

I bet you did. The whole day was great!

DyneWulf

I botched a lot of dialog this update it seems, hahaha. Some of them were rather amusing

DyneWulf

HAhaha, glad to hear it! I had a fun time with some of their dialogs

Bobby Thornbody

"Does that mean we get more presents for Christmas?" Best line of the whole day. I cracked up reading that. Loved the update, Dyne!

I Dare Korval

Enjoyed the chapter but a couple things: 1) You showed Maria's picture beside the text box when it was supposed to be Maddie 2 time. Once early on and another time near the end. 2) A couple time things were off with Richard's dialog. One time the word "hand" was missing ("..ran his down his face.." instead of probably "ran his hand down is face...") and near the end he says "How" instead of probably "Hope" to the MC regarding wanting to spend the rest of the evening with his girls.


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