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UPDATE

🕑 Added 2024-04-07 16:06:04 +0000 UTC

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Ivan Woluchem

I'm really thankful you all have positive things to say about the update😊. Also thanks for all your suggestions, I'll look into making lasting effects for dissipating the big red, and I've also been working on more socialization scenes. As for the discord group, I think this is the third time some ones asked this, and I hadn't made a discord group before because of how normally inactive I am on that platform, but I'm guessing it doesn't hurt to try🤷‍♀️, so I'll create one and link it later.

Venus

Thank you for the update. I like being able to choose our family background, why can’t an average mc come from a wealthy family? 😭 Some recommendations I have: Flavor text regarding our appearance and that of other characters would be nice. I think the crowd reaction after dissipating the red one could be more fleshed out imo as having someone easily erode a massive boss-like monster is shocking and even unbelievable which I think you wrote pretty well but I think it became too fast paced? Having a moment or two in the demo where we can pick someone to interact with to introduce or start developing a friendship with someone can give us a sneak peek into what ur style on character interactions would be like. And finally, it would be fun to have another moment to explore our powers. Again, awesome job. I enjoy your writing so far. 👌 Last thing lol, would you ever consider making a discord group?

Ivan Woluchem

Don't worry about that, I hate that kind of stuff too, it kills immersion. The way God Mode is written would barely ever remind the MC that it's a game, thanks to what Alexis said toward the end of their conversation.

Lanonymous

Very good story, I just hope for god mode...I'm not just constantly being reminded that I'm playing a game lol that just takes me out the game..


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