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Rewrite of The Forerunner Initiative - B1 To Play With Magic Epub
🕑 Added 2023-03-20 15:32:15 +0000 UTCHey all. Thanks so much for your support. Over the next few weeks I'll be doing a repost of TPWM on Royalroad as The Forerunner Initiative. And as an obvious thing I also should've been doing, I'll be posting the full epubs here first.
With that said, the epub for book 1 is attached.
Discord link for draft chapters https://discord.gg/BTPAcVnb
A summary of the changes I've made so far:
- Almost nothing was removed, though several scenes have been altered to varying degrees.
- Renamed Flights to Desh'ila
- Renamed Progression Points to Progression Marks and Advancement Points to Ascension Crests
- Changed the starting end dates of the main plot.
- Tipan gets a new class
- A complete line by line reread/rewrite. Lots of little changes that improve the overall quality, in my opinion.
- A new introduction to chapter 1.00, starting at her papa's clinic.
- Lots of rewritten scenes through the first half of the first arc, which ends with chapter 1.31 Wyonna
-Proper renumbering of chapters 1.31 to 1.95.
-several additional chapters towards the end of the Fallen City of Lescado arc (the one with the Giant spider robot, Fallen Triplets, and Training scenarios) Specifically the end of chapter 2.27 is rewritten, and chapters 2.24, 2.25, 2.28, 2.29 are all new.
-rewrites for arc/volume 3 (Glimmering Sands, Researcher/Minister Folthka, Battle with Ivicka) are light, except hopefully improved foreshadowing of Aethop's Daughters (the dolls), little more action for Lord Thansome, and just making Glimmering Sands part of the arc a bit less jank.
-rewrite for arc/volume 4 (Elementalist's peak/Desh Atun/Taken) Adding a chapter after/during 2.27 (which will become 4.27), A Sailor Went to Sea, Sea, Sea.
-Only going to have minor line edits for book 5. Already gone over the damn thing like 3 times at this point
Had to delete the epubs cause of Zon KU exclusivity.
