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Chapter 107 - To Be Young

🕑 Added 2025-05-22 14:00:11 +0000 UTC

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EclecticReader

Thanks for the chapter. I was thinking about this last chapter as well. Conflict, as a character seems out of place. Keeper has been established as a warden of knowledge, resides in an "arena" related to knowledge and offers knowledge as a reward for "beating" it's "trials". Then Conflict as I've understood is a warden of forging/assembly/construction or something along those lines. It resides in an "arena" related to what it guards. However it's trials revolve around combat? It just seems like a forced plot point. Even if you were to have the trials be focused on aspects required to properly forge (endurance, focus, etc), the whole combat requirement seems weird. As though you've taken two different entities and smashed them together rather than give them their own individual settings. After writing this out, I guess you could be setting up the forge to create an "army" depot or what not, but the story reads as focusing more on the utility of the forge than its war applications. Interested to see the direction your actually taking this character.

Munirah Hutchinson

Lmao, she was so excited! He forgets that bikes and cars and all these ideas of his aren't exactly known to Inertia. I love them. Do wish she would be a bit more considerate of Calburn though.

Jason Hardman

Doh!


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