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Unseen Scenes—End of Book Two, Treaty Version (Morgan PoV)

🕑 Added 2021-07-13 11:59:00 +0000 UTC

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anammorar

I did not know Falk could be attracted to my MC. Nias (MC): "I only have eyes for Morgan." - I loved this so much. I hope one day her jacket falls and our MC is able to see the picture. I hope the picture is strong enough to take all the battles, or maybe Morgan saved it in her bedroom after the mission.

Raychill

You know we joke alot about As Bill for broken items. But could you imagine Ms cigarette bill? I bet they have 0 savings. 😂

Seraphinite Games

Oh that’s a good idea. I think I’ll try like a ‘continue here’ kind of bold tags after the splits. Thank you for the suggestion! Really glad you enjoyed it :)

Joe Löwenadler

Man, really well done, and if you're worried it was confusing to read due to the split it wasn't at all. The only thing might have been to make it ever so slightly clearer when the second option in each split ended and when the universal text resumed. Either by making the space slightly longer or by putting some bold text to alert where the universal text begins again. Other than that no problem at all. Great read as always, I am very excited for what comes next and for my main gal Ava!


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