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The Wayhaven Chronicles—Update+ 27/Sept/2024
🕑 Added 2024-09-27 13:00:16 +0000 UTCI’ve finished the base writing for Chapter Four, and I’ve almost finished the first edits!!
As you might be able to tell, it’s been a very productive week, hehe! :D
Chapter Four came together sooo smoothly! There wasn’t as many scenes, which helped, but also a major chunk of it was just the MC and another character, which obviously helps keeps variations of scenes to a smaller amount with so few characters—though I still had to put a good amount in to account for some very important choices with this very important character…
But there was a really specific line I wanted this chapter to end on, as I finally got to write it I was like vibrating with excitement, lol! :D It sets up not only the next chapter on a fun, if intense, note, but also the rest of the story!
After I finished writing, I dove straight into the editing! There was an important bit of ‘mirroring’ I really wanted to get into this chapter at the beginning and end for the romances, so getting to read back through and make sure that was clear but also subtle was great to check on!
The romances really are progressing now, and although I want that to be obvious through dialogue and actions, I also want it to be there in the subtler, quieter moments too. I think that’s where deeper feelings can really shine the most! More of an instinctual thing than something the characters are actively doing.
Next week, I will easily finish of the edits and rewrites for this chapter, and then move onto social media days.
Social media days will take a bit longer as I have the Autumnal Scenario Specials for Patreon to write, which is really going to get me in the autumnal mood…before jumping back into the heated summer going on for the next chapter, hehe! :D
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For Update+ this week, Li-Sar and the MC having discussions…and a clash of personalities!
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"You're the one whose been [long redacted]," I throw out the allegation with force until the last words make my chest ache.
"Oh. Well, yes. Obviously, that was me." Li-Sar drops his/her hand to his/her side and turns on the spot to lean against the wall. "I mean, I don't like to brag—" He/She beams a smile. "Actually, that's exactly what I like to do." He/She ends with a chuckle.
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Hope you all have the most amazing weekend! We’ll be offline as usual, so I’ll talk to you all on Monday! <3
Comments
Keith
*Learns what the name Li-Sar means* ...Okay it makes sense they are prideful and willing to do certain things now.
Nathaniel Mayfield
You have an opinion Mr. Bond. Never apologize for it. I'm simply curious as to why.
Jason Bond
Ugh NO! I can't imagine anything worse. Sorry.
Mewsly
Li-Sar did tell us to always take credit for our, ah, accomplishments. Makes sense they would do the same
Sphinx
Same!
Nathaniel Mayfield
And it ends in a clash of rebecca vs the detective or his best unit bravo friend...
Ant Lrt
In all honesty, if a godly being were aggressively trying to seduce me my single brain cell would not care about what they did (especially with how Li-sar is described when they first appear) 😂
Ant Lrt
Having a route where the detective turns evil with Li-sar would be very fun (and probably heartbreaking) not gonna lie
Mar
Li-Sar 😳 we love a confident villain proud of their accomplishments (jk i am so excited for them!) Aah chapter four!! Yay!
Mar
My N mancer loves N dearly, deeply, devotedly … but she’s also my Li-Sar MC
Sphinx
Omg, Li-Sar 😍. N could you excuse me for a minute? This won't take long, I promise.
Lady Rutherford
Question about Li-sar Mishka. Are they gender/player sexual for the sake of them being a romance or does how they present have to do with who they form a bond with? If li-sar had bonded with the prophecy department man would they have possibly formed as opposite gender/race etc to be enticing to their bond partner?
Nathaniel Mayfield
Who cares what she's done. Give my detective power and let us execute order 66.
