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Chapter 90 (Thank you for your support, Joseph M Hill!)

🕑 Added 2025-09-29 15:16:53 +0000 UTC

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Richard Reid

I’m begging you to get rid of Viola. After something like 70 chapters of her just being an insufferable 11-year-old brat…. Let’s just say the charm wore off a long time ago. As far as I can tell, there’s nothing redeeming about this character. She’s just a pain in the ass who doesn’t actually add anything to the story. The little sister angle doesn’t even mean anything because they didn’t actually grow up together. While I recognize that you would lose a third of your word count, I can assure you, your story would be much better if it did not have this character taking up such a large portion of it.


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