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A Simple Change of Mind - Chapter 8

🕑 Added 2023-09-20 16:03:00 +0000 UTC

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Lakadit17

Thank you! Always great to hear such supporting compliments.

GhostnKC

I found you on FFN via this story and enjoied it so much I had to sign up here. Keep up the amazing writing.

Lakadit17

🙏🙏🙏

Sidraef

They can be stupid that way sometimes. Otherwise, it was a great chapter.

Lakadit17

Thank you for you pointing it out to me, it looked it somehow got auto corrected from granddad to granddaughter.

Sidraef

For Harry, since he arrived at Hogwarts four years ago, Dumbledore has been like an Idol role model to him; he has always been polite and helpful and been like a granddaughter to him. granddaughter?

Rogue

I know what you mean. I don’t know your way of doing things, but whenever I had to write papers/essays/reports, I’d come back the day after to read over it to find errors. It gave my mind a break, so I could see the errors better.

Lakadit17

Thank you for your comment and helpful critic. It's actually frustrating how many words I forget to capitalise when I am proofreading or editing. But I will make sure I do a better job on that next time.

Rogue

Your writing skills have greatly improved since your first chapter. Well done. The only critique I have for you, is to remember to capitalize a person’s name (Dumbledore), position (Minister of Magic, Professor), and the name of a place (Chamber of Secrets, Room of Requirement). There were a few times you missed these. Overall, good job and I’m looking forward to your next chapter.

Lakadit17

Thank you! That's the best compliment I could ever get.

J T

It’s official this is my favorite HP fan fic at the moment! Nice chapter!

Romavictrix

Im fully caught up and I love this story. I hope to see alot more of both plot and smut with some kinks thrown in. :) also I hope Maria establishes that she is first future wife lmao

Luna Darkfyre

Okays that makes sense and glad he will at least do it at the end of the year then

Lakadit17

At least in this year he won't, as the prophecy won't come into play until Voldemort is revived and once he is Dumbledore would finally lay all the cards he is still hiding.

Luna Darkfyre

another awesome chapter. it was suprising and good seing dumbledore admit to his fuckups but also being all to predictable and kept something back. i really hope he talks about the prophecy sooner and doesnt leave till the last minute.


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