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Different yet The Same World - Chapter 5

🕑 Added 2023-12-02 22:20:52 +0000 UTC

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Voracity24

Great chapter! I think with him being older now it only makes sense to go after some of the notable characters mentioned above (aka yes add more MILFs). Could give you lots of room with OCs with some reasonable background (not sure where in TL most died during the war with Voldy). Speaking of old cunts, I'm not sure how it fits in the timeline either but it'd be cool if some mention of good ol Gellert could be worked in somehow considering his obsession with the DHs unless that's changed in this AU. I'm thinking a letter to his ex or even some random decendent popping up wanting to bone the MC.

J T

This was a freaking chef’s kiss of a chapter. From beginning to end. Cliffhanger was a great touch. You have my vote to add Rosmerta. I agree with Darth Reven on most of the points. The only one that has me worried is adding Lily’s friends. They not have enough room to be properly fleshed out.

Darth Reven

Great job and I also would like Rosmerta, Amelia Bones and Appoline Deleocur added hell I also like for Harry to complete the black sister set there arnt that many stories with him having all three sisters. It also be cool if Harry could end up with Lily's friends as well. Overall this is a great story and can't wait for the next chapter.

travis btmb

great job and yes i would like to see rosmerta , amelia bones and appoline deleocur added

Pierrick Giannetti

Excellent ! Scène de combat magnifique.


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