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His Destiny - Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2024-02-24 08:55:51 +0000 UTC

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GrandAdmiral703

So I’m curious if you’re gonna update this story anytime soon because I would love to continue reading it hopefully now that you’re back and ready for action we’ll see some update soon. Here’s hoping.

Michael Marquardt

I know I will love this story cause the idea is so great but I could never find a male veela harry story that got finished that's why I was a little sad when I saw this did not get first in the vote but glade you are making it any way

felipe medrado

Ooooh yeah I agree with you 100%,they will definitely not like it. But it's still a very good story. I love the couple

Joe Matt

I know the story you're talking about. Harry Potter and the Siren's Song by hermyd. Yeah it's a pretty good story, though I doubt Hemrione fans will like it. Dumbledore fans definitely wont.

felipe medrado

This is very good, thank you for doing both it was very difficult to choose one,sooooo couple of things, first one this remember me of a siren male story that I read,it's was very good. Can you say how mane girls harry will have ? And maybe who are they? I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm already hooked, and will be very interesting to see Fleur,Gabi and Apolline reaction to Harry been a male vela.

Elias

It will be very interesting to see what Fleur Delacour's reaction is to harry and whether or not she will seek a bit of companionship since she could decide to mentor him in how to use his allure. I also picture Harry's relationship with Ron and the rest of the Gryffindor's being much different this time around, since the female half of Gryffindor should stick up for and prevent harry from being treated like a pariah when he tells them he didn't put his name in the goblet. I eagerly await the next part.

Rogue

One bit of critique. Don’t use ‘and’ at the beginning of a sentence. Same with other words that you would normally is a comma before the word. Examples: ‘and’ ‘but’ ‘or’ ‘so’. Edit: Be sure to capitalize ‘Death Eater’. It’s the name of a group. Gotta capitalize those and titles.

J T

This was great! I am so hyped for this story! Thanks for even attempting this idea not many people would.

Pierrick Giannetti

J'ai adoré ce premier épisode, les bases sont bien posées j'attends la suite avec impatience

Joe Matt

Haven't seen a male veela Harry story in like ever. This should be fun! Can't wait to see where this goes!

Niklas

I hope you will update this story soon. I am excited for the next chapter!

Daeron Targaryen

We need to get Harry in some 19th century English army uniforms he has to look the part of noble.

Darth Reven

Great start to this story can't wait for the next chapter like GrandTemplar612 said I haven't seen a Harry Potter male veela story in a long time and I'm honestly excited for this story

GrandAdmiral703

Nice I haven’t seen a Harry Potter male veela story in many years, almost 10 in fact hope you update again soon


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