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Would you hire this writer?
🕑 Added 2022-05-03 15:18:05 +0000 UTCHey Guys,
We received another story from a job applicant.
Take a look and rate the quality of what you read. You decide who we'll hire.
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(Simon = Main character)
Focus on the quality of the story, not the grammatical errors.
Focus on the quality of the story, not the grammatical erors.
Leave your comments below.
Comments
Iggydus
i like this story the most out of them all because it is the most well rounded and checks the most boxes. Intrigue, realistic, dramatic and romantic, sexy scenes; it has it all and blends well into how the current story and character patterns. Also the conflict is a great touch as it would be the norm in such a situation and it is handled without any extremities . The attention to body language is astounding and really sets the scene
KaoruCG
The story premise is okay, but the wording is way too distracting/disjointed for me being someone who speaks English as my first language. Sorry, JMO
In that case I think it’s a great story! I really like how it uses a new setting and old plot points to build tension between the characters. It feels like a natural progression while giving little reminder on how the characters feel about each other.
OppaiMan
I think we can find a way to get rid of the grammatical errors. So you should judge only the quality of the story.
A great story idea with lots of potential but, the number of grammatical errors takes away from the writing.
