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Fantasy plot
🕑 Added 2022-10-07 13:54:24 +0000 UTCHello, FreshMen!
Regarding the Fantasy VN, we have refined our plot options, and we'd like to hear your thoughts on them. Please pick your favorite:
1) You are an old veteran human hero. Your life as a fighter has really taken a toll on you, and you're thinking about retiring. Your shield maiden, a curvy elf, understands your feelings and is willing to help you. Amidst all the thinking, you get attacked by assassins wielding a magic device that can rewind time for a being, turning them back to children, and then to nothing. Your shield maiden partially avoids the attack. The assassins, however, managed to rewind you back to your 20s, and with it, some of your powers were lost. You take this as an opportunity to retire from the fight, but when trying to live a simple life, you get robbed by a woman so weak, she can barely stand on her own. You decide to help her recover from her injuries, and when people come after her and your shield maiden, you make a vow to protect both. The three of you then will travel through the lands, towards the Elven Kingdom, where they’ll be kept safe. Along the way, you will visit magical places and explore the world through the view of the girls by your side.
2) You are the hero of a prophecy. Raised and trained by your master, a curvy elf, to defeat the Evil that has scourged the kingdom. In fulfilling the prophecy, you brought peace to the world, and now, life feels pointless. You have been made rich and famous, but it is not fame which you seek, but purpose. You and your master disguise yourselves as commoners, only to discover that though the kingdom has been saved, its people haven’t. There's famine, fear, and hatred among the people. An assassin comes to try to take your life. The assassin is a human woman, and when she comes, you are ready, and she is defeated. She fears for her life, after failing her mission, and you decide to help. You renounce your old life as a hero, and convince her to follow you, since there is no hero for her to kill anymore. Together, you, the assassin, and your former master will travel together, searching for a magical place, far away from conflict.
Comments
wulftattu
i agree both have alot of potential
Rob Lantz
I like both ideas a lot....
Jubei
You’re right
Tsundere-Writer
It says he goes back to his 20s in the plot, though. Edit: aww they fixed it now :p
Iridium - Brian
What a great refinement of the concepts presented only just a short time ago. I am - as always - continually impressed by you and your team! Can't wait to see these new games start rolling out to us!
