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I need your feedback on Fantasy Act 1
🕑 Added 2022-10-22 14:25:02 +0000 UTCHey FreshMen,
We wrote the first Act of Fantasy, and we need your feedback.
Read and give your opinion here: https://form.typeform.com/to/xfDS275T
Your answers will let us know if we are on the right direction and adjust as necessary.
Comments
Michael Hawk
Portal failed for me. Not gonna try again. Just summed up: MC must clearly have full knowledge of his role and expected sacrifice in Act 1. He must have agency. If not, Elf is made a villain and King's actions have less of an impact.
