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Aeon Student Guide: The Korean Reunification

🕑 Added 2022-02-17 20:51:57 +0000 UTC

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John Hayden

“Prior to the United Nations decision to unify all member nations against North Korean” Korean should be Korea. That’s all I saw, looks good.

Chigusa Eyes

I love how it gives enough detail to seem like we're learning a lot...without getting into the most unpleasant of details. Also telekinesis tho 👀 I wanna learn why the nickname. Unless it is for the reason that immediately came to mind. Goodness.

S

"Alas,,,, :(" is making me laugh. Why so emo, Unity?

justapotato

I think it's clear and easy to understand! I would only change "North Korea’s historical allies declared neutrality on the issue, their message was clear:" by either adding "When" to the front or dropping the "was". Other than that, it's good 👍 And look, it's my favorite fictional dad :D


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