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A (high-heeled) journey to the unknown - Part 26 (final)
🕑 Added 2023-10-19 07:54:27 +0000 UTCHere it is, guys, the end of "Journey"... finally! It's not my best work, but I like the ambiguity of the ending. As I said before, I've been working on panel stories for so long that the format has become repetitive and predictable. I'm happy to focus on comics for the time being! In any case, I hope you guys enjoy it! :)
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SheilaSecrets
The most important part for me is that this was a beautiful, subtle visual transformation that I'm currently lapping up again in the PDF 😁. I like the writing a little better in Aphrodite's Mirror, but that's been your more major, long term release for awhile, so it's expected that AM would have a more complex story, more subtle character arcs, etc. Journey is amazing for the relatively shorter, linear sequence that it is, and I'm grateful for it. So, was Ms. Sani's tea some kind of potion? Did some witchcraft compel Aisha to accept her path when Aunt Zainab basically asked her if she wanted out?
Melissa N.
Just posted it! :)
J
Will there be a pdf version of the whole story?
Annabel
Also thank you so much for finishing even though the format no longer inspires you! It takes real dedication to finish something after the creative motivation is gone and I really appreciate you didn't leave this story unfinished.
Annabel
Excellent transformation, and a lovely way to wrap up this story
King Death
A really great story Melissa and great transformations.
Ron
This is a great story, on par with your other stories, especially 'Lesson for the Teacher', my favorite. Please keep up the great work.
Nino Heđi
So you didn't go with thembanian wedding scene as i mention a while a ago but you added wedding as something that happened so it's good.
Charlie
Thanks for sharing that great story, Melissa!
