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Aphrodite's Mirror (Chapter 26 part 6)
🕑 Added 2025-05-08 00:17:16 +0000 UTCEnd of chapter 26! just four more chapters until the end of the story! :)
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Kathleen43
New part soon, Melissa?
Kathleen43
What will Chapter 27 bring??? Wedding dress shopping? ๐๐พ
Melissa N.
Thanks for the feedback, Annabel! :)
Annabel
I appreciate the thought you've put into creating such a web of intrigue, but these kinds of long monologues tend to be less fun for the reader, and don't fit the format well. I'd much prefer the twists and complications revealed through flashbacks or drama filled scenes. You should be really proud of what you've created, especially since writers would usually have the entire manuscript completed before releasing it so that they could make edits and tweak. Really hard to get this kind of story right on the first pass. Personally though I feel like I just want to read the rest of the story. The images aren't really adding much, and I find myself wonder why we needed 21 panels for a paragraph of exposition. That's a ton of work you had to do that didn't really add much in my opinion :(
LC
kinda getting the feeling the cop there is on the plot and acting like marina is just speaking nonsense
