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Famished v.013B - The Wrights

🕑 Added 2024-07-30 23:35:15 +0000 UTC

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kr

who is Fleur again?

Warren

Great content. Personally, would like the Wrights more fleshed out. It feels pretty barren in main area, only being a bit more filled in if Harper is left alive, if not, it feels empty. I loved the girl's night, especially seeing how your relationships determine how Kat reacts to Rose eating Hazel as well as how Rose's tummy treats Hazel. With Rose commenting on how Kat wished Hazel was in her has me hoping we will get to see Kat having Hazel in her gut soon. Whether Hazel willingly let's herself get turned to kitty pudge or Kat decides the world is better off with Hazel on her hips.

hugsfordrugs

So i have some advice to give and this also applys to greenbrook. So whenever your doing a vore scene try to make the text related to who is eating whom and make the conversation they have different. Like whenever hazel ate someone in greenbrook afterward when she is walking around town and digesting, the coversation when she talks to her prey is to generalistic it needs to be more specific to who she ate. The same also applys to the disposal scene texts hazel talking about the person she is expelling makes things just better to enjoy. I would go back in greenbrook and possibly rework that area because it is a great place it just needs some fixes in my option. All in all though your doing great work keep it up!

TheMonsterWithin

So finally checked out I think fully. Solid update. The restaurant had plenty of nice scenes. Surprised for the Sio scene. Aside from that, Alba was cute although I decided to churn her. And the donkey guard I feel like could have been a longer sidequest. Oh and Rose date was interesting. Although sad we still can't give her a permanent meal.

TheMonsterWithin

I'll check it out later. I won't personally partecipate in the vote due wanting to save money, so I'll just say, it's best to flesh out the district if you feel it's incomplete rather than just leaving it feel half-empty or getting in the mindset of "I'll update it later totally and won't forget or lose motivation."


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