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FLTL Ch 212. Invitation

🕑 Added 2025-04-16 14:30:03 +0000 UTC

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Kuzunalis

That was true. I have rearranged the sentence now to make it sound better.

Jermel Purse

Found a typo I think there’s a word missing after the or maybe the sentence needs to be rearranged somehow and will prevent the another few hours which would have needed to thaw that ground once again. There’s a word missing.

Christian Pettersson

The speed of the story is fine by me. It is what makes it unique. 😊

Kuzunalis

I am already trying to increase the pace, which is difficult to do without completely changing the fabric of the story, but I think some changes should already be visible by now. I do believe that things are happening faster since the time skip, and it will gain more pace after the time when the winter ends. Thanks for the feedback anyway. I'll keep trying to improve it further.

Claudio Silva

Continue to love the story but it's still to slow for me.


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