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FLTL Ch 223. Perika

🕑 Added 2025-05-01 14:30:03 +0000 UTC

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Rodmin

I like to get to know more about the world, other settlements, more about the duchy and so on. Would love to know what other counts then cinran are in the duchy. I like that even the whole of civilization in the countries don't feel so overwhelmingly big and massively populated, it feels like civilization is still pretty early.

Jermel Purse

I’m mentioned in a previous post a book that might be helpful. A String Wiman In the Middle Ages Similar style of book to this where a young woman wakes up in someone else’s body. The person died and she is now in their body. Medieval timeframe she is an engineer with smart and well does what your character is doing. She’s Noble has a husband, but she’s a woman. All sorts of problems. I’m a fan of this genre and this is one of my favorite books. The author actually wrote 11 books total in this series. Originally they stopped at three books, but there was so much demand to continue. They squeaked out another 8. To be honest, the story could’ve kept going further, but I think the author just was ready for something different. Anyway, you get to see a lot of examples of how pacing is handled you get to see a lot of examples of how characters have different dialogue personalities. I recommend just taking a look at it real quick. Don’t read the whole series, but it might help with Easing some of your concerns regarding rushing the pace of your literature. This author wrote 11 books in I forget how many years lots of words lots of subject material touched up upon and if you look at the overall timeframe covered in the book, not that long, maybe five years. I was just hoping that this would help ease your concerns about how increasing the pace of the story might affect your vision.

Jermel Purse

Good history Lesson


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