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FLTL Ch 126. Final Preparations

🕑 Added 2024-12-06 14:30:02 +0000 UTC

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Kuzunalis

If the criticism is constructive and so polite, how could I hate anyone for it? 😊 And yes, I do read all of the comments, and I continuously try to improve the story based on that feedback. I'll keep trying to improve my writing every day, so you all can enjoy it even more! So thank you for genuinely caring and wanting me to improve!

Jermel Purse

Well, I was writing a comment but it posted before I could finish. Patreon, the app is horrible whatever. My point was this is taking a bit long and I don’t want to tell you how to write because each author you know is their book their work your piece of art presented to us. We do judge we do criticize so we are supposed to be critical. It’s taking too long. I have other series that I read and they would’ve been done with this assault in 3 to 4 chapters. There would’ve been the initial assault, that would’ve been a chapter that was all fighting, and then potentially two chapters to wrap things up. They may have even thrown in some medical knowledge or wisdom into those final two chapters but as someone who’s been with this series, I’m pretty sure it’s gonna take longer than four chapters to get through this again you’re the author do your thing we will judge the work i’m just pointed out how some who are fans keep arriving at the same conclusion. It’s just taking a little too long to progress forward. I’ve contemplated waiting and saving up one week worth of postings so that I can read them all at once and see how far forward we would progress. I subscribed to Patreon saying we’ll go 20 chapters into the future. Let’s see how far forward we would progress. When I finished, I was somewhat satisfied, but then I said man it still doesn’t feel like we have gone anywhere. It didn’t feel like the story had truly advanced any. as the author do your thing, don’t let our comments truly change how you approach writing, but we do have to be critical please don’t hate us for it.

Jermel Purse

As I’ve said before, I am a fan, but I have to echo what others have echoed on the standard form. This is taking a bit long. I’ll give it an example typically the assault that’s about to happen. I’ve read other series with similar context and it would take 3 to 4 chapters if written in this type if daily setting. A Strong Woman in the Middle Ages

Damien

Tftc


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