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FLTL Ch. 343. Circumstances

🕑 Added 2025-10-22 14:47:00 +0000 UTC

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Ariel Antonio Fundora

The novel moves quite slowly because many chapters repeat the same idea: first, the characters talk about what they’re going to do, then how they’re going to do it, and finally what they’ve already done. Sometimes that takes up the entire chapter, and nothing else really happens. For example, in this one, the only real event is that the merchant arrives. I think it would help to add more dialogue or some political intrigue to keep things engaging. Even the fight we had been waiting for was surprisingly simple. Still, I’m eager to see how the story develops.


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