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High Tide, Chapter 28

🕑 Added 2023-06-08 09:43:04 +0000 UTC

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Tertius711

I’ve actually had a Smaug idea b4 where he conquers Casterly Rock during the Sack of King’s Landing by Tywin’s army. I’m focused on High Tide personally though.

John

I had an idea since you had a Lord of the Rings crossover. Maybe you could do a another crossover but this time with Smaug during the dance of the dragon era. Just an idea

Tertius711

They didn't stay for the funeral now that Viserra asked them to go. I added this interaction after your suggestion at the realization that it strengthened characters, character interactions and development, and fit well into my overarching plot. That being said, reconciliation is far away still. Intentionally. This is not a conflict that can or ever will be resolved easily. Yes, it's possible the anti-Velaryon faction will change tactics.

Robin

I really like the addition! It felt very natural and I do love Viserra pointing out how both Alysanne and Alyssa aren't respecting her agency. Especially the point about how the letters weren't normal family letters that Viserra was ignoring but letters dissing her husband. Maybe later Alysanne will consider writing a letter just about Jace and Luke and Daella which are probably the safest subjects. I do think it would be interesting to see Alysanne and Alyssa stay for the funeral. If only for more awkward family discussions/arguments. One could argue that they have committed to be there for the funeral. And repeated interactions over a couple days could go a long way to healing the riff. Just depends on how fast you want the rift to heal. It'll be interesting to see how the dragon visit impacts the anti-Velaryon faction in Tyrosh. They've had a very vivid reminder that they're dragon problems aren't not so easily fixed. Can't wait to see how that plays out!


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