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Divide and Conquer, Chapter 3: The Tyrant and the Trout

🕑 Added 2024-08-06 18:17:20 +0000 UTC

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Tertius711

There probably will be an examination system yes. Maybe some sort of schools but no printing press.

TyrantGod

Will you introduce imperial examination system similar to how China had? So that commoners can rise up through meritocracy and also printing press & schools?

Tertius711

T9?

Arcturus

Sorry, T9 as usual 🤦‍♂️ Type from phone and it's changed words🤷‍♂️

Tertius711

Ethnic group not ethical group but yes indeed. Stonks! There will be much Essos/Valyrian immigration into the Riverlands for sure. Now come the rise of the Westerosi Valyrian culture.

Arcturus

For sure. And creating new ethnical group who fully support their rules, same a Andals did at first when they were minority. Nice move!

Tertius711

Glad you liked it! Valyrian aristocracy stonks go brrr indeed! Stay tuned to see how exactly that is formed! Just like William indeed!

Arcturus

Great chapter! This Aegon will do one major thing that his alter ego tried a few times but failed in the end. Thanks to previous Rebellion and annihilation of so many old Riverlords' lines, he can create fully new valyrian aristocraty in Westeros(examples of Baratheons and Qoherys), who will be his service nobility, all that they have thank to House Targaryen and wouldn't have enough forces to rebel like Robert and other Baratheons in canon! Totally grand move, like William the Conqueror did in real history🤴👍

Tertius711

A very great one indeed. Stay tuned to see how that goes!

Revan

any chance hell take harrenhall in tact?

Tertius711

You're welcome! Lol that does sound like a funny picture to imagine.

Lictor Magnus

Thanks for the chapter! In my head I picture all the river lords at the end all running and going for a slide to take a knee in front of the Targs 😂

Tertius711

I'll see about that but tentatively still next Tuesday. I will be busy this weekend so I'll try and do my writing Thursday, Friday, maybe Sunday and Monday night, and next Tuesday to try and get it done in time. I imagine the Siege of Harrenhal will be a long chapter.

TyrantGod

Will you update the new chapter sooner or same schedule?

Tertius711

Ah yes I was pondering a comma there. I am still thinking on what would be better for the flow of the sentence. 'the' isn't necessary since Targaryen is the address/name being used. Thanks!

Tertius711

Technically Chapter 2 and 3 are already 2 chapters so if it finishes in Chapter 4 that would make it 3 :). Anyway I'm still thinking on whether things will wrap up by the end of 4 and we move into consolidation phase in 5 or if 5 would be better to show the cleanup of the Riverlands post Harrenhal. Stay tuned. As for Aegon's most famous line, stay tuned!

Tertius711

You're welcome! Stay tuned for the next chapter!

Dragonslayer29

Thanks for the chap. Cant wait for Harren to piss himself when he see his castle burn.

Skruffy

From the top of my head, I can only recall the clever Targaryen one, followed by Edym. A comma on that sentence would separate the names. Also, I suppose a “the” before Targaryen would be better.

Tertius711

Nice! Glad you liked it and the ending was badass/made you chuckle. If you don't mind, could you point out the parts to me that you think need a comma?

TyrantGod

Nice chapter. Are you finishing Riverland conquest in 2 chapters? Will Aegon give his famous line “your line will end….” ?

Skruffy

The chapter was great. I chuckled at the ending, and the last line was badass. However, I could see some parts that would do well with a comma; otherwise, it was a solid chap.

Tertius711

Noted. Thanks for the correction!

Skruffy

On Edym Tullys pov you forgot to put Rhaenys when he first saw them.

Tertius711

Lol. Lmk your thoughts once you're done!

Skruffy

Imma snort this real quick


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