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Divide and Conquer, Chapter 9: The Fog of War

🕑 Added 2024-09-22 13:57:18 +0000 UTC

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Tertius711

Lol when you put it that way, you're making Visenya sound lame lol. Tbf to them all though, the context and circumstances are very different. Viserra was aware that she was pregnant and she only flew out one day. Visenya is not aware of it and has been exposing her body to the stresses of war campaigns and glass candle usage.

Benjamim Farah

Viserra Velaryon + - 8 months pregnant rides to battle Visenya Targaryen less than a 2 months preg and pass out :o

Tertius711

More like pregnancy in general messes up with your body and when Visenya hasn't realized she's pregnant and has been treating her body as if it wasn't, plus the stress of the campaign, she was making a problem for herself.

KAZUHA02

Very awful timing for Visenya's pregnancy symptoms. Does the presence of a fetus in the womb disturb the balance and strength of the mind that is required to manipulate and use the glass candle?

Tertius711

Thanks! Something interesting to consider as I believe that there is a chapter of the Faith Militant in Lannisport.

Omar

Nice chapter. I wonder if the Faith militant (that are already in the Westerlands) decide to take up arms against the "heathen" foreign invaders, and defend their homeland.

Tertius711

Thanks! Bro got inspired by the mutinies that helped him take Harrenhal lol. Stay tuned for the next chapter and how Aegon and Rhaenys react to Visenya's pregnancy and what they decide to do next!

Tertius711

Golden Tooth could be rebuilt tbf. Basically all the castles that ever got burnt were save Harrenhal, it's pretty easy to rebuild castles that aren't the size of Harrenhal. It wouldn't really make a difference in terms of strategics if Gaemon holds the Tooth directly or as his vassal would it? As for the Wards and Crown Province divisions in the Westerlands, stay tuned for them!

Sukhraj Singh

Good chapter as always. So Aegon is covertly arranging for House Reyne, to betray House Lannister after they are inside Casterly Rock. That would help sow discord amongst the Westerlands ranks. It also looks like Visenya is pregnant again, an unplanned pregnancy but that should not stop her from commanding the conquest of the Iron islands, though I suspect Aegon might decide to send Rhaenys to help reinforce her. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Arcturus

By the way, have a question about Wardens, as I understand ser Gaemon will become one. But Gold Teeth is destroyed and on strategic road, so maybe better for him would be Ashemark with Gold Teeth, Sarsfield and Hornvale as vassals? Something like Wardenship of Ashen Road or something llike that? Am I correct that there will be Wardenships of Pendric Hills, Western Hills, one for Gaemon, Fair island with peninsula of Kayce and some for south territory with Crakehall as capital. And Rock with Lannisport would be royal territory(would be good because it's second biggest city on continent right now)

Tertius711

Well said as well Dragonslayer, stay tuned indeed

Tertius711

An interesting analysis, stay tuned to see how it goes with the other kingdoms and how the Targaryens deal with them!

Dragonslayer29

True but the cornered animals are always the most dangerous

Tertius711

Ahh in that case then yeah that works. Likely the perks all Ranger families get tbch, their service is really very good and important.

Arcturus

About element of surprise true, but in other hand Targaryens have much better powerbase than in canon, they are richer, with better lands, stronger army which would be increased in number and in 10 years they will have at least 5 or even 7 battle ready dragons, Aegon and co are still quite young. Only opportunity for other Kingdoms to do something with Dragon's expansion is to unite against them. But I don't believe that North and Vale or Reach, Stormlands and Dorne could fight together. Storm and Reach is possible, others no, too much bad blood, cultural and religious questions to each other

Arcturus

I mean something like good house and payment for his family, opportunities for younger siblings to become knights or find good husbands for sisters. And he could knighted with given him manor with some portion of land in Hills of Pendrik. Maybe after retirement from service he could settle there with his family, it would be quite symbolic!

Tertius711

Indeed! Awfully inconvenient timing for their parents though. We'll see how pregnant Visenya changes up the course of the war. What do you see Crowley being rewarded with? Rangers don't really do big rewards after all. The Lannister main line (not all the endless cadet branches) will be destroyed, males either executed or sent to the Wall, females to the Faith.

Tertius711

You're welcome! Rhaenys isn't pregnant since this wasn't a planned pregnancy plus after they both got pregnant the first time they've tried to avoid it ever since, just too much stress all around. They space out their children since then lol. They'd probably have Rhaenys have another one after the war. Stay tuned to see how the storyline proceeds now that as you say, the Targaryens have lost the element of surprise. The division of the Westerlands will be interesting indeed!

Tertius711

You're welcome! And hopefully Jacaerys can avoid his father's canon fate indeed. Stay tuned to see if he does!

Durrie Muncher

Thanks for the Chapter, hopefully Jacaerys can avoid the fate of Canon Daemon from the battle of Gultown.

Dragonslayer29

Thanks for the chap. I wonder if Rhaenys is also pregnant as Aegon wants his children to marry each other to keep the dragons in the family so I’m curios to see what his reaction would be. I’m very nervous about what’s gonna happen next because now everyone else in Westos knows that they are on the war path to claim all the regions. so it is gonna be harder now for him to operate since now the Targaryens lost the element of surprise. I know it’s hard to kill a dragon, but it’s still possible especially since it’s a different timeline. I know that they are more prepared now than in the original timeline , but things could still happen. Excited to see how Aegon going to divide up the Westerlands .Thanks for the chap and can’t wait for the next.

Arcturus

New prince or princess on the way😁😁😁 Pregnant Visenya is most terrifying and dangerous Visenya 😳 Nice chapter, Crowley should be generous rewarded after Rock and Lannisport falling because this meeting is key for quick victory! P.S What your plan with Lannisters? Hope something in Tywin style for men, and Wall, Citadel or Faith for women and children? Maybe exile, but Blackfyres example showed that prepretenders and rivals should be done with as fast as possible without mercy 🤔


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