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Divide and Conquer, Chapter 16: Submission at the Eyrie

🕑 Added 2025-03-09 06:42:59 +0000 UTC
Divide and Conquer, Chapter 16: Submission at the Eyrie
Divide and Conquer, Chapter 16: Submission at the Eyrie
Divide and Conquer, Chapter 16: Submission at the Eyrie
Divide and Conquer, Chapter 16: Submission at the Eyrie

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Tertius711

The Targaryens are going to promote High Valyrian more but it's unlikely it spreads to the common people given how not even the Targaryens' own Valyrians speak it that well. A Westerosi Valyrian dialect blending Common and the various Essosi dialects of Valyrian including High is likely. I imagine High Valyrian will increasingly become the main language of court though.

DragonEz

I like your stories so much!! Also are the Targaryen’s going to further promote High Valyrian so it will be a common language amongst the common people? And how commonly is High Valyrian used at the King’s court?

Tertius711

within two weeks

Amit Efraim

When is the next update?

Tertius711

Did you have time to go back and read it in detail later? Also yeah fair enough I don’t disagree. Smut deffo shan’t be subsuming the story, this will be the last I think, to round out the trifecta of having an intimate scene form the POV of all three Targaryens. After this it would mostly be focused on all the perfect conquest stuff we love so much :)

TwoJacksAndAnAce

The smut was good although I was at work so I didn’t read them in as much detail as the rest, my only issue is that without the smut the update seems rather small and barebones. While in the plot this advances a lot for the reader the chapter can basically be summed up as them taking the bloody gate, landing on the Eyrie and the Arryns surrendering and then some horny time and a peak at the next moves of the remaining Arryn forces. I love your writing and this story, it’s absolutely amazing and it’s exactly how I’ve imagined a perfect conquest would go but compared to your other chapters this one was rather small and like half of it was the smut. I don’t think you want that subsuming or over writing the rest of your work.

Tertius711

Any details you can spare? Wdym by the smut could use some work?

Big Black Chemist

Everything else is good, the smut could use some work.

Tertius711

Glad you liked it! We shall have to see indeed how the Arryn guerilla war goes!

TyrantGod

The chapter was awesome! Death by a thousand cuts strategy by Arryn rebels. It will be interesting to see how it is countered coz going Dracarys over guerilla warfare in the mountains is not going to be too effective.

Tertius711

Oh. Thanks for the compliment. I'm quite new to it so I'm glad I'm able to write it well.

James Mackenzie

That’s just cause I felt like a horny bastard today and you do excellent smut scenes. They are every uni boys dream!

Tertius711

Icic. I'm glad you like all those things! I work hard on them. Wdyt of this chapter in particular?

James Mackenzie

I love how in-depth you go with things like the city planning, the lore of magic and the history of Westeros, it brings it to life. You also make the religions seem more relevant then they ever where in the tv show, it make it actually like it would be in medieval England with the church and paganism. I also love how in-depth you go with the medicine and how you plan the government and what they have actually been doing when there is a time skip and how things change. And you do a very good job of doing the reactions of other characters to the targaryens actions, you make each character feel unique and like an actual person instead of like a cardboard cut out like some fanfics do. The only thing though could ever bring you to higher standards in my eyes would be if you did a Brandon the builder fic or a stark fic in general but that is just because I love the stakes and the north and the old gods and warring. Keep up the fantastic work

Tertius711

Hmm? Perhaps. The Faith Militant is so fanatical so it might be a reach. Any thoughts on the rest of the chapter?

Tertius711

Glad you think so! What made it glorious? Any more in-depth thoughts?

James Mackenzie

Fucking glorious

Snack00

Idk but I feel like the Targ’s have spies in the faith militant


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