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Divide and Conquer, Chapter 22: The Aftermath

🕑 Added 2025-06-27 18:34:19 +0000 UTC

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Tertius711

Stay tuned!

Tertius711

Facts! There shall be NO plot armor this time.

Lightisyhepathtosark

I hope to see Dorne, Bowed, Bent, Broken, and Burn

Lightisyhepathtosark

I always hated how Dorne have it plot armor. It made no fucking sense. For all that GRRM claims Westeros to be more realistic Lord of the rings it gave Dorne ridiculous plot armor. Especially when the Yronwood declared for the Blackfyre multiple time. Like what the fuck?

Tertius711

Glad you liked it! And yes I KNOW! It was so hard to do it arghghghg. Omar was convincing but still. It feels WRONG to write Martells making any moves that are even remotely smart even though it does make sense and is logical. ARghghghg. GURMMMM And yeah I definitely wanted to try and remain compliant to canon Nymor but it was stretching my own SOD so hard to do it lmao. God Dorne is so stupid and makes no sense in canon.

Tertius711

I still have a lot of mixed feelings about that so could you help me resolve them by elaborating on what you mean by this lel?

Tertius711

Well they were actually converting from the Faith of the Seven to the Fourteen Flames or other Essosi religions not from the Old Gods but I get your point! Yes it is quite likely to make the Riverlands/Crownlands more accepting of magic than they already are. But only Valyrian magic ofc. Not the evil skinchangers :)

Tertius711

You flatter me! Stay tuned! I'm going to try and get back on schedule with Chapter 23 by Wednesday!

Tertius711

Glad you liked it! Let's see about the kids finding more magic eh?

Tertius711

Nice. I'm glad you liked seeing other perspectives! If you don't remember, the Courtier was a POV way back in Ch15. Wdyt of Brandon and Meria's interludes?

TabbyRabbit

The changing of faiths from the old gods to the 14 flames is a nice touch as well. Will this also make magic more acceptable to the crownlands given the nature of Valyrian religions being tied to magic?

Tj321

I think you portrayed Dorne well. Another great chapter!

Odysseus

Need more, the feeling at the end of every new chapter is worse than crack lol

Kolek

Loved seeing everyone's reactions. Ngl though, seeing a smart Martel in this time period was almost immersion breaking lol. Nymor's plan felt almost like the work of a Self inset rather than the cannon character :D . That's more of an issue with the original world building though, the dornish just don't make any sense.

hh

Nice seeing the perspectives of others. Now that the kids are stuck on Dragonstone, this would be the perfect scenario for them to go looking for the hidden magic tomes/books. They would certainly have the motivation.

TwoJacksAndAnAce

It was cool seeing other’s perspectives, especially a courtier at Summerhall.


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