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June 2023 Monthly Poll Winner - Harry/Fleur You're Losing Me Part 2

🕑 Added 2023-07-03 15:59:02 +0000 UTC

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OlinOzin

I have a love/hate relationship with this story already.

Robert

Definitely some slight angst in this one, the way you went with the prompt is how I could see it being written as a short story definitely. Making Bill likable adds to that. The wording you used for Fleur’s inner-monologue at the end I think was intentional, and was super important. Looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully some hope for Harry. Really well done so far. Glad I suggested this prompt and really glad you went the direction you did with it. Cheers!

Morrigan Newhart

Really ought to wait for all of these parts to be out because I can't get enough of this and we're clearly not having a smooth ride here. Thanks for the chapter and can't wait for the rest! Super glad this didn't end up being just a one-shot.


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