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Frenemies Part 2

🕑 Added 2023-10-16 16:10:46 +0000 UTC

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Arctis_Shox

I think the main thing to point out is that Harry is trying to channel his inner Dumbledore here, and he's finding himself not entirely satisfied with the reasoning he's put forth. If only there was a certain Slytherin who could help him see things from a different point of view.

Robert

Not a fan of how you are portraying Harry here… but that’s probably because it seems closer to canon Harry and being Dumbledore’s mouthpiece always make me dislike Harry’s characterization, comparing Sirius and Draco is kinda too big a stretch though. I don’t think you’ve built up any romantic tension though which is going to make how you set the third chapter interesting.

Cqys

I mean...I can kind of get where Harry is coming from...but Sirius and Draco are not the same. Draco attempted murder and wanted death eaters in the school. There's a time for compassion yea but this is just not one of them. Mind you Dumbledore being so "compassionate" is a big reason why the second war went on as it did.


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