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The Wizard of Fury Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2024-10-18 15:59:01 +0000 UTC

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Nova Sana

Well, wood wouldn’t drift upriver either, without something to push them against the current. Perhaps if some of the Ironborn ships had managed to get upriver of Highgarden and some of Stannis’ ships fought them there.

Arctis_Shox

Thanks! I definitely did a bad job of explaining my mental image in this chapter; life's been pretty hectic. I imagined some of them falling onto debris from the battle (planks of wood, segments of ruined ships, and so on and so forth) and that was what carried their bodies upriver. I'll probably edit that chapter to reflect what I meant.

Nova Sana

It’s a minor detail and I understand it was just to set the scene, but: “Those aboard ships and boats who were killed fell into the sea, and some of them began moving up the slow-moving Mander.” I found this passage distracting because I kept wondering how the bodies could drift upriver toward Highgarden. It was a minor distraction though and overall I loved your relationship and character building. I am finding how Harry integrates into the world of ASOIF far more compelling than I ever expected and I am eager to read more!

Saeyla

Very much enjoyed every chapter of this so far, can't wait to see where it continues to go.

yan boul

Question is what will Harry find with someone or not?


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