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Apoleone 2024 - First Page
🕑 Added 2024-02-03 05:58:25 +0000 UTC Hello my friends. I got a mega cold π€§. My health is a kind of fragile. Even so I finish this first page of Apoleone. The pages can receive updates, so take the opportunity to suggest an improvement in English if it is needed. π₯³
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RodrigoH
oh, i get it now xD
Winter_Fairy
The 5Β° frame is looking tottaly wrong. It was my cold drawing in my place.
Winter_Fairy
Thanks. The rain is a personal joke. When someone call me to go out and I don't want.
RodrigoH
I love how Olivia is looking so elegant, even speaking french, such a refined and hot ladyπ and the air conditioning and laptop brands are priceless xD
RodrigoH
The comic is looking good, i just noticed one detail in the second text, "to make me hang out" would be more correctπ Also, is it fine the text "under this rain"? is not supposed to be sunny and hot outside?π€
