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DRAG*NBALL Z Silver Age - Chapter 3 - First Day - COMPLETE
🕑 Added 2025-05-02 06:19:52 +0000 UTCSynopsis: Gohan goes through his first day at highschool. How will it end?
Synopsis: Gohan has started his first day and it's off to an interesting start. After foiling an armed bank robbery as the mysterious Gold Fighter, he has fallen under the suspicious gaze of Videl- daughter of Hercule and part-time crime fighter- who has also taken a more keen interest in his look.
Her best friend Erasa has also taken an immediate liking to Gohan.
How will Gohan's first day differ from canon, especially with his classes? And how will it end?
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Silver Age CHAPTERS
Chapter 1 & 2 - Prologue + Gohan Goes to Highschool - https://www.patreon.com/posts/dragonball-z-age-126569118
Chapter 3 - First Day - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127964449
Chapter 3.5 - First Night - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-131072048
Chapter 4 - A New Hero - https://www.patreon.com/posts/133976351
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Silver Age Omakes
Omake #1 - Birthday Surprise - https://www.patreon.com/posts/128101053
Omake #2 - Lost Prince - https://www.patreon.com/posts/136932253
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Silver Age PDF List - https://www.patreon.com/posts/dragonball-z-age-127897170
Comments
Super Lombax
Hopefully he can restrain himself a little better during some of the clubs. Lol
TheWriteFiction
Thanks. I used panels from the existing manga and anime to frame some of the shots, so thats it's as close to the OG source material as possible, but with some changes I believe should've been made.
Super Lombax
I must say, I really like just how well-drawn everything is here. It's like the actual anime.
GamerLegend09
๐ easy now tiger
Omar DeLaHoz
Now this chapter is done I hope Naruto gets love and focus now?
TheWriteFiction
Sorry, those are two separate panels. Gohan is looking down at both of them.
Reizeropein
Yeah!!!! It is indeed cinema!!! God level panels ๐๐๐
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 36 & 37* ๐ mymymy how Scandalous, ๐คจ waitโฆ I see two extra hands here ๐๐ป โฆโฆthe right looks more masculine though
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 35* ๐๐๐ป Solid Wingman Support Zangya, ๐คฉ cool Capsule Corp. Phone too (๐ง looks like an IPhone model)
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 34* โTo do whatโ she says ๐๐๐
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 33* ๐๐๐ B-B-B-BUSTEEEEED
Super Lombax
Ah, okay. I was kinda thinking, "Oh, Gohan's gonna have some explaining to do to Chichi when he gets back home," but it looks like Zangya's got it covered. Lol And wow, Chapter 3's over. Definitely looking forward to what happens next with all these new developments already.
TopSuperDave64
I Absolutely Love This, Threesomes are Always The Greatest๐๐๐
Joseph c guillory
It's about to get hot and wet for gohan and the girls ๐ง ๐คช ๐ ๐ ๐.
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 32* **Top 2 Panels** ๐ go in and find out **Middle 2 Panels** ๐๐ thatโs cause you are and you should go in and find out **Bottom 2 Panels** ๐ฉ sweet Dende PLEASE let it be an Orgasm Shriek or a Shriek of surprise from his 13-14 inch C%%%
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 31* ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฌ yuuussssss so much better in color
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 30* ๐๐๐ oh my Dende yes
Super Lombax
Videl is here to save the day! ...and become completely red from head to toe after seeing what her friend's been getting up to.
The Jonizuka
๐VIDEL, HE GETTING IT IN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!๐
The Jonizuka
๐ฅฐMmhmm๐ฅฐ Erasa taking command and hoping on GIGACHADโs lap
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 29* Ohh you sweet summer Child she hasnโt fully โThankedโ you just yet๐๐๐
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 28* Wow sheโs an expert in Fighting but not too Witty in putting 2 an 2 together to spell out the obviousโฆ..๐ oh right, Tomboy
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 27* Mmmmm๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 26* **Top 2 Panels** I love seeing oc depictions of Erasaโs Parents **Middle 2 Panels** โฆyou know what, that career feels fitting for herโฆ.in a sexy T.V. Reporter type way. **Bottom 2 Panels** Wow that book looks Thicker in her hand up close ๐คช๐คช๐คช๐คช๐คช
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 25* **Top 4 Panels** ๐ ๐ ๐ Bulma & Zangya shouldโve warned him about this too **Bottom 3 Panels** ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ Sweet-pea youโre worrying about the wrong person in this Scenario
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 24* **Top 2 panels** Damn, I wonder how fast that bike can go in miles per hourโฆalso Cool building complex **Bottom 5 Panels** ๐๐๐ ohh this Thirsty Bitch
TheWriteFiction
Hahaha
Reizeropein
Oohh! I update the panels, uhhmm Yamamoto? is that you? ๐๐
TheWriteFiction
Well, looks like we're getting to a peak climax moment in this chapter: Erasa has invited Gohan into her apartment and Videl is tailing them. Should this chapter end with A) Erasa bedding Gohan while Videl just watches from the cold not suspecting a thing or B) Erasa roping Videl into a threeway to surprise the freshman and get her best friend to admit her feelings? I can go either way. (And before anyone asks, NO, I'm not including any other girls outside of these equations, cause that would make no sense)
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 23* **Top 3 Panels** ๐ซฉ Videl Sweetie, your Jealousyโs showing **Bottom 3 Panels** ๐ yeahh, you hold onto that hunk nice and tight rasa Sweetie
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 22* **Top Right 3 Panels** ๐คจ whoa hold up what? **Top Left Panel** ๐ฒ Sweet Super Kami Dende why couldnโt Gohan own one of these in the Canon Series?!! **Bottom 4 Panels** โฆ๐ฌ again I ask, why!? This is Screaming Fan-service Gold right here!!
GamerLegend09
๐ itโs taking a backseat for a while longer
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 21* **Top Right Panel** ๐ yeow!!! ๐ this Blondieโs on the Prowl! **Top Left Upper Panel** ๐๐๐ oolala are we sure sheโs not trying to post some moves of her own right here **Top Left Lower Panel** ๐ ohhh that poor naive little country bumpkin **Bottom Right Panel** ๐Like a Predator ๐ Catching their prey **Bottom Left Panel** She needs to show more Backbone here if she doesnโt want to end up dead Last (then again there could be some potential for a possible Throupleโฆโฆ๐๐๐ not sorry, Reeseโs)
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 20* ๐ I love the change in this scene, ๐ maybe this time around Gohan and Sharpener can be good buddies
Super Lombax
Oh, he's gonna join some clubs this time around? Should be interesting.
Omar DeLaHoz
How goes Naruto Rogue?
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 19* ok videl staying suspicious was expected but seeing all the men (๐ minus Sharpener surprisingly ๐) being jealous of Gohan getting lovestruck attention towards him makes me wanna say to emโฆ โitโs not our boys fault heโs hot! Get good Scrubs and get on his level ya lazy bitchesโโฆ.๐ and I didnโt studder
Julian Fratzscher
Both the bat and the ball might just explode to dust.
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 18* ๐ Imagine the crater heโd make with a full-on swing while shattering that bat to pieces.
TheWriteFiction
In a way, yes.
Julian Fratzscher
Okay, Gohan seems to be lacking a little when it comes to restraining his power.
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 17* **Top 4 Panels** ๐๐๐โฆ๐คฆ๐ปโโ๏ธ, I PRAY that he didnโt singe some that hair off her Pigtail **Bottom 3 Panels** ๐ well, even if videlโs more suspicious at Least Rasaโs Too loveStruck ๐ to notice
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 16* **Top 3 Panels** ๐ NICE SAVE!!! **Middle Right & Center Panel** just look at that face on her, lost in aweโฆ. ๐ค or am I mistaking that for thirstful lust **Middle Left Panel & Bottom two Panels** Easy now you have eyes on you here
GamerLegend09
Write โ๐ปโฆ. ๐ this feels so much better than the 30 ft Jump
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 15* ๐ถโฆ. ๐ welp this will definitely make a damn good first impression, ๐ I mean hey maybe they wonโt even notice in all the excitement right?โฆโฆ.๐ ๐ ๐ right?
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 14* ๐ณ ya knowโฆI almost saw this one coming
TheWriteFiction
The panel of Gohan catching the baseball just before it hits Erasa... probably one of my most favourite panels to draw recently. Not gonna lie. I wanted it to have a similar impact to how everyone reacted to Gohan's 30 ft jump in the anime. What do you guys think?
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 13* **Top 3 Panels** ๐ come now Rasa tone down the Sex Drive and focus Girl **Bottom Right 2 Panels** Here Comes The Wind-up **Bottom Left 2 Panels** ๐คฉ AND ITS A HIT!!! ๐ฅโพ๏ธ
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 12* **Top 2 Panels** The key is while putting what you learned into practice, โnotโ to Overthink it **Middle Right & Center Panel** Looks like the his Physique levels not strong enough to distract her suspicionsโฆ๐ damn **Middle Left Panel** ๐ HEY BATTABATTA!! **Bottom 3 Panels** ๐ You could cut the Tension Between these 2 with a knife!
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 11* **Top Right Panel** ๐ after all those years of homeschooling, Iโd be surprised if she wasnโt **Top Left Panel** theyโll treat him very hospitable ๐๐๐ **Middle Right Panel** ๐Oolala ๐๐๐ Lady Zangya so Bold **Middle Left Panel** ๐ uhhhโฆ.๐๐ Miss Zangya Miss Zangyaโฆ..๐๐๐ what seems to be uhhโฆโฆ๐๐๐๐going on there huh? **Bottom Right Panel** Ohhh she helped him alright๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ **Bottom Middle Panel** ๐ณ they even did โTHATโ on the Battlefield?!!
TheWriteFiction
Hehe. You'll see in the next page. Though I will say... am surprised you are calling Erasa Fash(a)? Is there a reason?
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 10* (Edited) **Top Right Panel** ๐ you should hear what his dadโs been throughโฆ..ayyo Fash (Edit: Rasa), ๐ youโll drool at this rate **Top Left Panels** Stick with who youโre comfortable with, Amiright!? ๐ฅด **Bottom Right Panel** ๐ฅฐ Yupโฆ still cute๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ **Bottom Left 2 Panels** ๐ youโre gonna have a LOT to learn about Girls from this point on Mr. Bookworm
Joseph c guillory
Thank you for writing these chapters and sorry i didn't thank you earlier.
TheWriteFiction
That's just him. He's naturally solid.
Julian Fratzscher
Pg 9 Is Gohan flexing at that moment, or why are his muscles hard?
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 9* **Top Right Panel** ๐ the Gawking is real **Top Left Panel** Spikey even iโd ask if I was in her shoes **Middle Right Panel** Easy there Sharpener youโre almost Drooling **Middle Left Panel** ๐ not enough Hours in a Year Fanboy **Bottom Right Panel** Careful Fasha watch where you poke or youโll accidentally find his 3rd Arm **Bottom Left Panel** ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ awww look at this Precious little Tomboy
Julian Fratzscher
Pg 8 Everyone wanting a piece of that beef.
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 8* ๐ HAH!! ๐ I knew it, ๐ I love the change in clothes and color ๐ and the expressions on Fasha & Vโฆ๐ priceless
TheWriteFiction
I'm hoping Naruto X Samui or Naruto X Kurotsuchi. Maybe both atst.
MDD
By the way, any updates on your Naruto story? Was looking forward to how the next chapter goes.
MDD
Hahaha gotta love that reaction. Videl and Erasa are definitely smitten.
Omar DeLaHoz
Any Naruto art or Doujin on the near horizon yet?
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 7* **Top 2 Panels** ๐ Itโs nice to see in this universe. They let the boys and the girls play together for gym class, ๐ reminds me of my school years **Bottom Right 2 Panels** Waitโฆ that Hercule Fanboys name is Pensilโฆโฆ is that Canon or is you pulling my leg here? **Bottom Left Top Panel** See now you would โThinkโ that **Bottom Left Center & Lower Panel** ๐ฏ oh?โฆโฆ๐ ahhh I think I know whatโs coming next pageโฆ ๐ and itโs perfect
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 6* **Top 2 Panels** ๐๐๐ youโre Hot for Gohan **Middle Right & Center Panel** ๐ณ holdon! ๐ณ๐ณ๐ณWAITAMINUTE!! **Middle Left Panel** ๐คฆ๐ปโโ๏ธ damnit Son **Bottom Right Panel** ๐ฌ heyheyhey the Teacher! **Bottom Middle Panel** ๐ tollld ya so **Bottom Left Panels** ๐๐ป nice save Pointdexter
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 5* **Top 2 Panels** ๐ boy canโt tell sheโs onto him huh **Middle Right Panel** ๐ one of the few instances I appreciate Pencil Sharpeners help **Middle Center & Left Panel** ๐ถ okk, starting to drift the Focus a little **Bottom Right Panel** ๐ yeeesss Videl drift faarrrther awayyy from the realm of possibility **Bottom Center & Left Panels** ๐โฆโฆ.๐ Wow Videl, youโre a perv.
TheWriteFiction
This line was in the original DBZ chapter when Gohan was chatting with Erasa, so I'm guessing yes.
Julian Fratzscher
Pg. 6 Gohan can even make that lie come true, thanks to Bulma. Also, is this a reference to how in the Super manga, Gohan told Goten to lie about where he actually lives?
Julian Fratzscher
Pg. 5 Videl seems to like big chests.
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 4* ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฌ Shit, Forensics in the The Write Fictionverseโs DBZ Silver Ageโs no joke
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 3* **Top Right Panel** ๐ this teacher is pretty much a staple in this universe by this point **Top Left Panel** ๐ Erasa Swaaaan! **Middle Right Panel** ๐ YOUNGER ERASA ๐๐๐ ๐ I canโt wait to see her appear in Golden Age next **Middle Left Panel** ๐ณ ohh Shite **Bottom 2 Panels** ๐ Damnโฆ he Gohanโd too hard
TheWriteFiction
That's his new ones, but it's zipped up. I'm sure you can find the OG screenshot of these three online.
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 1&2/Cover* ๐ heyy the Jacketโs newโฆ. ๐ unless he wore that one from in an older illustration Iโm not aware of
GamerLegend09
I could think of 100 ways this could goโฆ. and half of them are Not Safe For Work ๐๐๐
TheWriteFiction
Sorry. I'm just so overladen with work, I probably won't be accepting new commissions until next year.
Tank Poe
I apologizeโน๏ธ
TheWriteFiction
Absolutely not.
Tank Poe
Are you doing Commissions right now?
