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EYON: Fantasy - Chapter 1 - Prologue

🕑 Added 2025-08-10 15:22:55 +0000 UTC

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GamerLegend09

*Pg. 16* Though they have met an unfortunate Tragic end to their life I hope they pass on knowing their child is safe 😔🙏🏻 may you Both Rest in Peace

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 15* **Top 2 Panels** Still so tragic to have met such a Gruesomely Violent fate **Bottom Right Panel** I love seeing him use magic, so cool 😎 **Bottom Left 3 panels** Ahh smart, 🥲 an heirloom to remember his mother….🤔 now what can they give him that’s from his Father?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 14* **Top 3 Panels** Maternal Instinct ACTIVATE!!! 🥰🥰🥰 **Bottom 5 Panels** Look at you master Folin showing your inherent Detective Skills🤩🤩🤩

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 13* **Top 3 Panels** 😯 oh? **Bottom Right 2 Panels** 😃 it’s a miracle!! **Bottom Left 2 Panels** …🥺🥺🥺ohhh they’re so precious

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 12* 😕 poor Lady, 😔🙏🏻 may her soul rest in peace

TheWriteFiction

Yep. A Dwarven Summoner and Fighter. Basically he was the titular and crowned Hero who protected the continent from evil- basically who you would have regarded as the MC once upon a time. He may or may not have defeated the Demon King and their army a long time ago in his prime, and has now since retired.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 11* Ahahh so it was magic 🪄, and a dwarven lineage…😊 I would not have figured that, I just assumed they were hereditarily small in stature…🙂 that’s cool regardless, the only reference I have of Dwarves using Magic is the Goblin Slayer Series

GamerLegend09

😈 that’s hot

Federico Cecchi

If I recall right It would be a Futa or a Futanari in this comic?Is She appear or not?🤔🤔🤔(It would be an Amazing story anyway😁)

GamerLegend09

Oh wow indirect Title Drop (:The Dangers in My Heart)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 10* **Top Panel** I see so they’re all affiliated with each other…..does this make him the master Roshi of this series just less perverted? (Also 😍😍😍 this series is starting to feel dangerous for my heart) **Middle Right Panel** Interesting Frame right here… almost like someone or thing can see them from inside the Wreckage-😄 oh hey the bird’s back (just noticed) **Middle Left Panel** Looking from this angle I don’t feel fully convinced on how focused he is 😂😂😂 **Bottom Right panel** 😳 Master!!? 🙃 starting to feel like he’s leaning a little more towards the Roshi type old man **Bottom Left Panel** 😅😅😅 I know I wouldn’t be able to focus if I were him😏

Super Lombax

Ah. Got two warrior class women. No armor on at all, but I have a feeling that won't affect the amount of damage they'll be capable of taking throughout the story.

TheWriteFiction

You will see where it was hiding. Lol

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 9* **Top 2 Panels** This Environment would NOT! allow me to be this calm (😑 seriously where was this old man Hiding that Ogre club?) **Bottom 4 Panels** 😍😍😍😍!!!….. 🤤whatwerewetalkingabout?

TheWriteFiction

Hahaha. I love that. Nice one.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 8* 😳😨 the fuck did he pull that big ass Spiked Ogre club from?! 👹

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 7* 😩 of course there’s another one

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 6* 😳 whoa big Ktty biig biig Kitty

TheWriteFiction

Thank you. It looks great.

Chris Cannon

*Pg 8* Birds: Bad ol' putty tat!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 5* 😧 my gosh how horrible

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 4* 😊 I love when you color the landscapes like this, 😁 the old man looks cool too

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 1, 2, & 3,* 😍 Nice Moons 🌕

Super Lombax

Oh, she almost had him. Gotta be quicker than that.

TheWriteFiction

I understand. Glad to have yah back, mate. Hope to get around to your commission of Android 18, Krillin, Gohan and Maron, if that's still on the table.

GamerLegend09

🤩🤩🤩🤩 HOLY SHITE IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS STORY!!!! (😅 sorry I’ve been away for a bit, internet’s been a pain in my households ass)

Nagore6305

Glad to hear you managed to move passed that block and started your passion project

maverih

Glad you overcome your writers block to work on your long awaited project, that is EYON fantasy, I hope chapter 1 will have both protagonists become and remain naked like in the cover.

Adam Dee

Ooo this looks cool! I always love to read an original fantasy story

Super Lombax

Ah. I see you've finally got one of your original projects going. Let's see how this turns out.

RCD91

I'm a sucker for the Fantasy Genre, and I thought this story was Haitus for evermore. I am happy to see this story getting some love and is going to go far.