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Chapter 23: Improvements

🕑 Added 2021-04-30 05:45:25 +0000 UTC

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0xFFF1

Yeah, that heirloom will end up unused unless she has children of her own someday. I bet that Nurturer inner desire will become ever more insistent after puberty. And boy wouldn't that be awkward if, after she accepts that part of herself, she finds out afterward that her past life was a human male.

Comiak

Fixed! thank you!

Theredscare77

Thanks for the chapter. You have 500% for the before and after on Alysara's Kyhosa. I think it’s supposed to be 200% for before description.

Comiak

Fixed! Thanks. I run the chapters through two spell checkers and they still miss things.

Ian Radspinner

Sparing->Sparring when you're talking about fighting. Thanks for the chap!


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