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Chapter 33: The Makings of a Dress

🕑 Added 2021-05-14 03:32:59 +0000 UTC

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Comiak

Her dresses very much will be :P

ClapTrapCL4TP

This line could do with a touch up - The only thing I can safely say was flawless was the base of the dress, everything else had to be redone. But this took me a week to do and I needed to make another, - When reading through it the But this took me a week to do sounds a lot like it took a week to redo everything else, if the line was instead But doing this much already took me a week to do. It would be a bit clear on what took a week to do

Comiak

Ironically they are doing it to prevent envy and nepotism, but you do bring up a really good point, maybe the parents will get a talking to at some point.

thkiw

This is becoming problematic. I'm sure the elders could complain about giving out anything too extravagant as usual. I get that family members want to help family members, but in the future this might give rise to envy and nepotism. She already has created a second sub species that would have more benefits from both, now she might change the gift giving trqdition to allow for more extravagant gifts. In the future any two tailed one will be compared to single tailed ones, I'm not sure this and the current extravagance is very good for their culture.

AchroniaXenia

She should make herself a special mana dress at some point... it sounds really beatiful

Comiak

The tailoring is done, yes, but there's still enchanting to do.

Robert Mullins

"the gains for completing this one dress were substantial"

Comiak

It's not quite done yet, the chapter was already over my goal of 2500-3000 words and there's still a whole another thing to do for it to be done.

Robert Mullins

Kind of annoying that we saw all the lead up to the dress an presumably it's completion but don't see the result


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