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Chapter 181: Eldritch Gazer

🕑 Added 2022-06-07 07:43:01 +0000 UTC

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Dragonkinn

continents inside>>contents

Dragonkinn

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all those names might sound very strange in their language? others might not even be translatable. ^^ and if she really needs a ship, she shoudnt build an airship, but a space ship. that world is vast. even if that turtle only swam with 1knot, taking 2 years is a pretty long voyage, and with skills i doubt it was that slow. so she better has a warp drive to get anywhere in a timely manner. as such, enterprise might be a good name indeed. ^^

Norbert Fuksz

Sounds like a relly good trainIng partner if you think about it...

Nematrec

Eldritch Counterseer (Grand) Level 782 Shadowless Sentinel (Grand) Level 554 Retaliatory Gazer (Major) Level 648 [Illegible] Bond

Michael Hughes

That requires active use. I would want auto pilot and a mobile base of operations to keep my stuff while I am traveling the world. Plus she can't very well carry companions bridal style everywhere she goes. Half the fun of Mass Effect was going back to the ship to interact with your crew to find new dialogue options. Plenty of reasons to want a ship. Plus she could paint it red with flames on the side to make it go 20% faster automatically.

Jemini

She doesn't have a great deal of need for a personal airship. She has wings and the ability to fly 90,000 kilometers.

Michael Hughes

TFTC. Now she can see just how powerful Gaze abilities can be. I am excited for the completion of the airship. Given that she is going to be traveling eventually she should also make a personal airship. Now I am just thinking about what features I would want on a personal airship and what I would name it. Serenity, Normandy, Moya, Enterprise, Galactica, Post Dated Check Loan, Millennium Falcon, Highwind, and more. What would you name your airship?

Iblis

My prediction is that she finds away to trick him into tracking her down making him jump to a hostile layer. Not sure if that would give her the legendary point or not if he dies from the environment, but I'm guessing her clones could survive there while she takes him out if needed. Just keep the trick going so he can't jump to a safe layer, if he can focus that is.

crue

I'm wondering what being that was between those layers. Edit: Oh, nvm, it's in the title. :p I guess the saying is correct then: If you stare into the Abyss, the Abyss will stare into you.

Jemini

Another interesting addition would be if she consults Syfer and she informs her that, due to the amount of training she's specifically done in anti-tracking training, this isn't quite enough and she has to raise the stakes. The raised stakes would be that her real body has to be inside the Nexus.

Jemini

With all this anti-tracking training, I've actually started to wonder about how things are going to go with that legendary assassin guy who wants to make her his empress through marriage. I can totally see a scenario where the two are in some kind of perception Vs. tracker competition. I was actually thinking it would be a rather appropriate legendary challenge. She would first have to find out about the legendary assassin's intentions for her. Of course, she wants nothing to do with that. However, should she be nearing 20, the deadline for her to start having to deal with the gods, and needs a legendary point fast, she could propose a rather crazy challenge. The idea would be, she works it out with him ahead of time. She will keep her perception on him constantly for 1 full day. During that time, if he can track down her real body, she will be forced to marry the emperor. The interesting thing will be if she can set it up so it's a mutual challenge, such that legendary assassin dude can also have a chance at a legendary point. He would, of course, have to declare a dire consequence for failure for that to work. His can be that he will personally kill his emperor if he can't find her in time. (Of course, carrying on the story without it going in a super creepy direction demands that he looses and the emperor threat is removed.) This can then be followed up with him STILL trying to make her his empress, just with the marriage to the emperor thing now off the table.

Norbert Fuksz

I like her keeping his lust in check... they could ruin their relationship with her real quick if they treat her like just another noble open to political relationships in order to get power. You first have to understand who you are dealing with before you propose such things...

Eric Ketterling

hope this gets a ton more chapters this is the first patreon I have used and is well worth the price thank you for another great chapter

Giperman

I like their sibling's energy.

AClassroomSpider

thanks for the chapter!. .


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