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Chapter 52: Rival

🕑 Added 2021-06-16 23:34:33 +0000 UTC

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ClapTrapCL4TP

just had a thought that the mana arc could be used to power a device that would allow easy communication between the ancestor and anyone.

Theredscare77

Uhh have you read the light novels? Their deviation is a major plot point.

Giperman

She can try split personalities like in "I'm a spider, so what?" Where every personality is her talking to herself. As fas as I remeber they don't deviate from original at all, no matter at which point in time.

Jachin Nelson

I don't know many 14 year olds that aren't assholes in one respect or another. Not to say there aren't some, but the competitiveness is certainly there as is the appropriate level of jealously for that age range. (Especially for someone who would have been considered the best for there age)

Comiak

Yeah, I'm not too big on the idea of split personality either, but I kinda have to bring the topic up as it is possible as a new breakthrough. As it currently stand there is no real use of split personality unless it's using acting as well. If I do go that route it will definitely be used with the clones as having multiple voices in Aly's head probably won't work too well and I'm not that good of a writer.

thkiw

It makes people wonder that someone has to work hard to revolutionize spellcasting by the age of ten. It even started to annoy *me*. Like basically, she said - "You talented bitch: how dare you succeed. And even be better than me! I bet you are also lazy and stupid." How entitled. they're also implying that that she's been lying? Her entire tribe basically worships her as a hero. They're basically accusing everyone in her tribe. As well as the elders, of lying about her. Damn. That's rude. Rude and entitled. Very unlikeable.

CyclopsSlayer

If Aly splits her mind too well I can see a war arising. "I need that mana!" "Well, I need it too and got there first, nyah!"

alexbk

hmm. maybe have each of her two minds control the clone and the real body each

0xFFF1

She needs to get Talk no Jutsu'd

IJustWannaRead

Ah yes, the “I worked so hard for this but since this person is younger and stronger than me they didn’t work hard like me they are just talented.” She needs to get knocked upside the head I really hope she loses the fight.

DANTE

Thanks for the chapter, Uloru seems interesting, the idea about multiple personalities is risky in my opinion, I never seen it proposed in a good way and never enjoyed it, merging the personality with a clone can be interesting and it create a new character, it's not my favorite thing but it has the potential to turn out really good, an idea I find more interesting is to make Alysara able to control and share senses with the clones and her real body at the same time, leaving her as single entity, there are a lot of novels that make multiple minds with separate personalities and is not that original

0xFFF1

owo A new friend?


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