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Chapter 64: Mind Games (Edited)

🕑 Added 2021-07-14 19:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Comiak

That's because this chapter is being told through Esofy, who's not aware of his cercumstances.

Killajade

I believe this is the first chapter where Tana is actually referred to as a female. First as "she" and then "a strange looking girl". Every single other chapter Tana has been referred to as the, seemingly, only male Runalymo.

Comiak

I may have gotten a few tenses mixed up but where do I switch from third person to first person?

Fraxx

this chapter really needs editing. u are switching between present tense and past tense and first person and third person all the time

Vincent Emil

Ah, indeed, i didn’t read too carefully but you’re right

Logan Vingris

It is probably a mind control to make her consider the slime an ally and then her acting to throw everyone off as well as to just let go and play around.

Vincent Emil

Mind control? Isn't it just acting?

Kagaros

Great chapter. I thought it was her twin mind skill getting a breakthrough at first. Cringed alittle on the inside each time she used gamer terms though

Logan Vingris

I actually really like this alysara

Atigasgas

Nevermind, I've just read the note of double chapters today. You shall be forgiven of your sin, THIS ONCE.

Atigasgas

You can't end with such a cliffhanger! That's just pure evil!!


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