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Chapter 76: Spawning (Edited)

🕑 Added 2021-08-09 22:30:52 +0000 UTC

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Colm Ryan

What were the 8th and 9th breakthroughs for Sense Soul?

Venalitor

Wasn't Aly Implying to fight the boss with her clones at the end of the chapter? No real danger to herself, so why the reprimand?

MadGod

The real question is how exactly can puns exist in the Runalymo language for Chyzu to be cracking them? The whole idea of puns is to exploit the different meanings of words, how would that even work in a conceptual language?

Imp

10th and 11th breakthrough should allow up to level 120, not 110.

Comiak

She had a few lucky breaks, took advantage of the dungeon situation and people's grief of those who died, but there's still plenty of time for setbacks, struggles, and bad decisions. If it did take years for her to get the heart, then years more to make elixirs, and so on, Aly would be a metaphorical god by then, so I kinda have to speed things up for her anyway.

Kagaros

Don't get me wrong, I still love the story as a whole. It's just when it comes to Papuyo as an antagonist it feels as though it's a badly planned plot device for the matters related to Shara and Alysara's cursed skills. The process in which Papuyo went from being the sole surviving priestess from the super storm to becoming a villain expected to start a theocracy has the sense of being rushed and unrealistic in contrast to the rest of the story that's well paced and understandably realistic.

Kemizle

You make good points. I’m still loving the story though😇

Kagaros

Here's just my little rant but the problem I have with Papuyo and the priestess is that things are way too convenient and smooth sailing for them all in order to create a crisis. There's hardly any resistance to her movement, both from the other priestesses and the elders, and the ruins excavation is progressing abnormally fast. Based on how long it felt it seems only two or so months passed where Papuyo already found the location of where to dig, it happens to be where an important Shara related building was, and even had a dangerous looking item there. These types of results would feel more natural if it happened over several years, including the time it took for Papuyo to build up enough influence and power to manage it all. It's just strange how not a single word of the ruin excavation had been leaked to the elders or Alysara despite the large scale of it.

0xFFF1

Technically, blood can be given to the heart by inserting it into her own body. There's plenty of blood in there.

Imp

Papuyo is going to make more cursed beings, isn't she. Or turn into Shara herself.

ClapTrapCL4TP

Seeing Shara's middle heart piece might be what Alysara needs to figure out how to either get rid of the mana manipulation skill, cure it, or more likely, in my opinion is having it take the place of Kayafe's skill which may or may not be possible and thus rescuing her, although there would still be the problem of a body.


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