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Chapter 130: Crystals and Golems (Edited)

🕑 Added 2021-12-17 22:35:12 +0000 UTC

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Crashdevil

I wholeheartedly agree with this. I feel that she really isn't cut out to be a permanent member of a team. The way that just her mere presence changes the battlefield completely changes how her team needs to operate and it would be too much of a hassle to learn how to handle things BOTH with and without her when she can't be there. As her ability to operate solo grows over time, I feel that she (from the perspective of others) would excel as that one character that's left to do whatever they want because they're capable as hell and is called in to help when the "main characters" need a powerhouse to help under very specific circumstances.

It'sATap

I'm liking that she's going down her own path while somewhat staying with the others. A true heroes journey isn't the soldiers journey after all.

Jachin Nelson

Thank you for the chapter

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter. Ruluna shakes hee head to refocus herself and the black sphere engulfing the soldiers. -> something is wrong here I think, on instead of and perhaps? "What the fuck was that! Flame Paladin -> missing " A plan form in -> A plan forms in or about a times multiplier. -> how many times? when putting it like that answer is obvious -> when putting it like that the answer is obvious just increased my pressure in everywhere in -> just increases my pressure everywhere in Buildings, furniture, anything that has become old enough have become -> has instead of have? Family heirlooms, easily known by it Heirloom tier, -> the instead of it All of this leads me to question why doesn’t the Runalymo have more magical items? -> don't instead of doesn't Part of the answer is there there is obviously more to the requirements -> delete one there there’s a higher chance of stuff becoming magic but virtue -> by virtue Then there’s the fact that lots of stuff are recycled or buried with the owner, favored items, and dedications to Myrou. -> This sentence is a bit odd. "stuff is" should be used instead of stuff are, despite stuff being inherently plural. It might be better to use "things" instead of stuff, but I'm not sure


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