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Chapter 138: Let the Politicking Begin!

🕑 Added 2022-01-10 23:44:51 +0000 UTC

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HattmanHendrix

A few spelling mistakes…

ShotoGun

This arc is shaping up nicely. Much less boring than the last few.

Giperman

The whole mood of this chapter

Tjark

I mean, in a way it's always been known she will at some point be at least a demi-god. Just look at Safyr. She is more or less a demi-god to the Runalymo as she's regarded as their guardian while Myrou is their goddess. Similarly almost all of the more unique and accomplished legendary beings are akin to demi-gods. The dragons are creatures of legends for example. Then we have the order of oathbound among the humans from the 1st side chapter which was also demigod-like with the emperor actually being godlike. It's called legendary being for a reason. Whether that will actually have any consequences in the question of her gaining 'divine' abilities is unknown. At the same time she is already considering the bond and everything as divinity and a natural counterpart of magic. It's all in the perspective but suffice to say she will definitely at some point and up as one of the most powerful beings in existence. ps: curious about the pain of making the staff too

Sondrex76

My thoughts on the patron only chapters are in a different comment. I found a few potential minor misspellings and such while reading: 124 "Well, prepare things on this end; you'l" -> "We'll, prepare things on this end; you'l" "history regional items showing up in oth" -> "history, regional items showing up in oth" "nation's the second shows a stapl" -> "nation's, the second shows a stapl" "Myrous blessing. Environmental " -> "Myrou's blessing. Environmental " "judging on the mind essence around several members of the " -> "judging by the mind essence around several members of the " "puppeteer others. I'll hav" -> "puppeteering others. I'll hav" 125 "one basing themselves around" -> "eight basing themselves around" "area that the city-states are. " -> "area where the city-states are. " "like too kindly being spied upon, b" -> "take too kindly to being spied upon, b" "time instead of having more fu" -> "times instead of having more fu" "I've adverted or fixed three disast" -> "I've averted or fixed three disast" 126 "atom's protons, neutro" -> "atoms' protons, neutro" "what inscriptions can truly be " -> "that inscriptions can truly be " "frameworks to accomplish. This false mag" -> "frameworks to function. This false mag" "flay over to the du" -> "fly over to the du" 127 "This is pier is used almo" -> "This is a pier used almo" "Lotis' complaint. "Your Bon" -> "Lotis's complaint. "Your Bon" "Alysara, we going to fly today, ri" -> "Alysara, we're going to fly today, ri" "They are my sisters, Yafe and Y" could be "These are my sisters, Yafe and Y" "can't also neglect the things I h" -> "also can't neglect the things I h" "should consider getting my s" -> "consider getting my s" 128 "evolution of adds on to the existing framework with littl" -> "evolution adds on to the existing framework with littl" "goal is two make the ready" -> "goal is to make the reader" " Stygian hackles raise as it se" -> " Stygian's hackles raise as it se" "and its skill are too low " could be "and its skills are too low " "gazed upon with the weigh" -> "gazed upon us with the weigh" 129 "framework is can only" -> "framework can only" " magic than there is divinity. The " -> " magic as there is divinity. The " "f the Lyran’s team dies and Ruluna’s teams does not" -> "f Lyran’s team dies and Ruluna’s teams does not" "Thankfully Command Tent is set s" -> "Thankfully the Command Tent is set s" "out. Gana complains.”" -> "out” Gana complains." 130 "it like that answer is obvious." -> "it like that the answer is obvious." "magic but virtue" -> "magical but virtue" "but watch Esofy and the others fight without me," -> "but watching Esofy and the others fight without me made me realize that" "enemies you get used to them. It may do us all a" -> "enemies: you get used to them. It may do us all a" 131 " monster on land that you ha" -> " monsters on land that you ha" "Lotis’ tenth year is next" -> "Lotis’s tenth year is next" "like, you so most don’t" -> "like you, so most don’t" "Lotis' expression." -> "Lotis's expression." "but it’s just the act of killing the mo" -> "but it’s not just the act of killing the mo" "from of her then pinches a" -> "front of her then pinches a" 132 "warrior’s oversized " -> "warriors’ oversized " "narrowly catching the group waiting" -> "narrowly missing the group waiting" " flank, open Kadona tak" -> " flank open Kadona tak" "Kadona’s sword bits into the" -> "Kadona’s sword bites into the" "spine to the neck swing her scythe and " -> "spine to the neck and swings her scythe, " "the Felins back; she " -> "the Felin's back; she " "Esofy, runs down " -> "Esofy runs down " "like mush like her bones had " -> "like mush, as if her bones had " "guys doing stand around " -> "guys doing standing around " "all, fighting the same monsters all this time, and you won’t be able to properly adapt; to unknown monsters" -> "all, after fighting the same monsters all this time you might not be able to properly adapt to unknown monsters" "key I can attune it to the" -> "key, I can attune it to the" or "key and I can attune it to the" 133 "and others, but it wasn’t ve" -> "and the others, but it wasn’t ve" "friend Kyhana, Kyhana is around Lotis’s ag" could be something like "friend; Kyhana, Kyhana is around Lotis’s ag" "yet t realize " -> "yet to realize " "lp me, I was consulted ancient beings on " -> "lp me, I was consulted by ancient beings with " "Kyhana she has a rare knowled" -> "Kyhana, she has a rare knowled" "the fairies counter-attack, " -> "the fairies' counter-attack, " "withstand attack this ferocious. Th" -> "withstand attacks this ferocious. Th" "man. I start channeling more " -> "mana. I start channeling more " "wooden spear follow my" -> "wooden spears follow my" 134 "deforested turned into mulch. Even the gro" -> "deforested and turned into mulch. Even the gro" "Treants head. Next, I look deeper into it, an orb" -> "Treant's head. Next, I look deeper into it, an orb" " like my space manipulation one I ha" -> " like the space manipulation one I ha" " for the wielders sensing abilities." -> " for the wielder's sensing abilities." "one of my Bond skills I gained befor" -> "one of the Bond skills I gained befor" "eyes rough shape mo" -> "eyes' rough shape mo" or if it was only one: "eye's rough shape mo" "Treants [Nature Manipulation] skill; " -> "Treant's [Nature Manipulation] skill" "unheard of; I’ll have to ask Kayafe if she knows anything similar." -> "unheard of; I’ll have to ask Kayafe if she knows of anything similar." "and also made this made, aren’t I am" -> "and also made this, aren’t I am" 135 "hem. I bet is that " -> "hem. I bet that " "That is really impress" -> "It is really impress" "but I what for kayafe to " -> "but I wait for kayafe to " "eyes wraps became a ma" -> "eye wraps became a ma" "not share my own enthusiasm." -> "not sharing my own enthusiasm." "even it meant the lives of that ha" -> "even if it meant the lives of that ha" "The republic politics is weird, only the member of House Vanu Runa " -> "The republic's politics is weird, only a member of House Vanu Runa " "fall playing with peoples lives." -> "fall for playing with peoples lives." "pressure on just around the items. I am holdin" -> "pressure just around the items. I am holdin" "think she is from our ancestor’s homeland." -> "think she is from our ancestors’ homeland." 136 "sure she is not hostile right now; maybe t" -> "sure, she is not hostile right now; maybe t" "will spell be? Never mind " -> "will a spell be? Never mind " "next meet Ruluna teaches A" -> "next meeting Ruluna teaches A" "notes or her memory enhanc" -> "notes or her memory is enhanc" "have at least three days to Alysara and prepare h", not entierly wure what to suggest for this one. "months of sail anyway; it’s " -> "months of sailing anyway; it’s " 137 "short one since e didn’t " -> "short one since we didn’t " "moved the Temple Island, allow" -> "moved to Temple Island, allow" "need to all everything that will make this " -> "need to make everything that will make this " "With the of [Inquisitive Perfe" -> "With the help of [Inquisitive Perfe" "that when her mind clicks, the " -> "that is when her mind clicks, the " "more deeper than Ruluna gave credit." -> "deeper than Ruluna gave credit." "so much gracefully." -> "so much more gracefully." "stationed, checking everyone who enters, " -> "stationed there, checking everyone who enters, " "poorer become poorer, the " -> "poor become poorer, the " 138 "and displayed above " -> "are displayed above " "going to the bit your tail off. Thank you for your " -> "going to bite your tail off. Thank you for your " "still feels being watched." -> "still feels like she is being watched." "need to study your society as to not accid" -> "needed to study your society so as to not accid" "quickly gets under control, as do the " -> "quickly gets it under control, as do the " "surprise by trying to suppress it. I ignore" -> "surprise while trying to suppress it. I ignore" "There are many things in which I might be an " -> "There are many things in which I might see an " "of all time to come, well, mostly. I" -> "of all times to come, well, mostly. I" "presence simple because she was not ac" -> "presence simply because she was not ac" Thanks again for writing and have a nice day!

Sondrex76

Nice chapters! (I am referring to all the ones that are not public at the moment). I wonder if she is going to become a demi-god at some point. Very close to each other a cat monster got convinced she was a god, and a group of soldiers sort of thought she may be one. If that trend continues she may start getting worshippers, and considering her ability to observe and be at many places, she is uniquely qualified for such tasks (even if she would absolutely hate the very concept). I imagine a scenario in which she gets worshippers and then gets offered a class or class evolution that does not seem like a divine class at the surface, beyond it requiring some worshippers to get, but that takes her to the path of divinity. That's more of a long-term possibility though, and it may have been a red-herring, or a case of the author showing how she appears to other people, like they did in a few other chapters. There could also be a legendary achievements in getting enough worshippers, or maybe in having multiple heroic monsters think she is a god, but that seems unlikely, or at least not very plausible to be a realistic possibility for her. If she ever does start the path to ascension, perception and observation, as well as magic, seems like logical domains, maybe with a bit of beauty put in there. Maybe the monster will become her familiar? There may be a system for that, and then since it thinks she is a god, it could later become a divine emissary or something, assuming something like ascension will eventually take place (which I honestly doubt). I am very curios about why she felt pain when she made the tree item, and what it will do when used. Maybe she accidentally made a cursed magic item, but she would have felt that, and she have made too many magic items even before that, so maybe she just have too much experience and its creating items? Maybe she has to use that mythic point at some point? We shall see I am sure. Thanks for writing, it was a lot of fun. I found a few potential minor misspellings and such and will leave them in a separate comment.

MadGod

Sasuga Ainz-sama!

Squirtle

It would require her to increase her perception pressure to specifically look at quality of enchanted items/magic items. As far as we know, she only increased her pressure to Analyze people/monsters and to get a better look at specific things. Remember that her lesser pressure doesnt cause retaliation, but she can't see as clearly with it. So, its possibly she didnt look at the quality of their magic items/enchanted items... I think she should have if she was gifting such items.

Venalitor

"I stand there, trying not to look awkward. Did I perhaps not make them good enough?" - After all the study Alysara's done on their society, she knows damned well if the items she gifted them are good enough.

Allpa

TFTC found some typo's powerful monsters and displayed ==> powerful monsters are displayed [Alanyzed] ==> [Analyzed] we don’t feel her presence simple because ==> we don’t feel her presence simply because

Robert Mullins

That awkward moment when you want to establish trade with a foreign nation but they are only interested in items from a 14 year old girl who crafts as a hobby and largely has no personal need for money.

Felrook

It’s always fun when your blind (heh) stumbling ends up looking like pure genius

Giperman

"She's good" "Ah damn. Did I screw up?" Hillarious


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