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Chapter 139: Currency Concerns

🕑 Added 2022-01-12 23:34:25 +0000 UTC

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Sondrex76

The new version's end felt smoother then the old one. I found four potential minor misspellings and such in the new portion: " should be much of an issue me" -> " shouldn't be much of an issue since me" "Orlans eyes continually drift do" -> "Orlan's eyes continually drift do" 'a moment of silence falls over the m' -> "A moment of silence falls over the m" "For our safety we need the funds this trade will bring us. " -> '"For our safety we need the funds this trade will bring us. ' I do wonder though, is the new language not similar to her own just with some linguistic movement? Wouldn't the word then be obvious, or is it shortened in a way that does not make it obvious? She also seems to have rather strong opinions on economics, although when she has been brought up in a society like the one she was brought up in, combined with what seems to be a past life living in a country with rampant uncontrolled capitalism (USA is my guess probably), that makes sense.

Venalitor

Oh! The edit was great. I was weirded out by how much weight was given to the currency in the original, although I am suprised Alysara knew their word for 'tarriff' to have to play dumb when they brought it up. Probably some other more specific terms as well.

Squirtle

In the earlier spying chapters, I believe it was mentioned that there are very distinctive males and females compared to Aly's people. So im pretty sure it was supposed to be a "He" for the father rather than she.

Pawzom Lz

This rewrite makes the chapter so much better. Theres a few mistakes I noticed that I will list below. She raises a hand to stop her.(who is she? her father? it seems to suggest that but everywhere else the father is referred to as he, and the fact that he is thought of as father by Lysha rather than Momara and he by Alysara makes me think he looks like a male? But as far as I remember, from Alysaras perspective in the chapters so far we havent seen these obvious gender differences so it just leaves me confused about whether they are female/male or female/hermaphrodite like Alys people?) everything can be used strategic applications. it should be much of an issue merchants making it very hard mentality; "Right." OIrlan says, I am a little over of head

Brandon Anderson

I think the rewrite came out great Tariffs would indeed be the important factor here. This trade route could be considered a highly dangerous silk road so, Alysara would have what can be considered high end luxury goods and military Hardware. Selling the military equipment to the government would most likely not incur a tariff but they would expect a discount and the government would make the money selling the equipment to the different mercenary outfits. Cloth and clothing would be sold to nobles / merchant class, and the only food would be specialty goods ( tea, bananas, spices). Now how they can get around this would be to charge duties instead of Tariffs. Tariffs are taxed on goods as they come in so the merchant pays them duties are taxed on the consumer so the nobles/merchants would pay them.

Squirtle

Its much easier to read, enjoyed it a lot more. I also like that Lysha brought up the war directly instead of just assuming that Aly knew about it. I mean, she has better things to do than just watch over the kingdoms all the time.

Maury

The New ending is a lot better, thank you for the improvement. realistically I don't see how they can enforce tariffs when they aren't even going to be the ones transporting the goods. if Alysara can't get them to not implement that, then that'd have been a big failure on her part.

MadGod

That's exactly what she wants to avoid: the artificial escalation of prices and the resulting increase in social stratification which is a much more serious concern in a world where miasma and cursed beings exist. She doesn't want this ideology to infect the Runalymo as well.

Giperman

I like this version more. It gives chapter better fow than it was before.

Ex Caseus Fortis

To be fair, Alysara and the elders control the price. If the government wants to place tariffs they can just raise the prices to offset it.

Grumlen

This new chapter ending makes more sense, and will lead to a better "clash of cultures" than currency manipulation. I would actually think it better for them to focus on not trading for actual currency until the route is better established.

Sondrex76

Nice chapter. I have no opinion on the currency discussions, though I am more curios about how this will affect Alysara. Especially how much of those Leviathan remains she will have to handle personally, how much her village will take on, and lastly how much of it she and her village will be able to acquire for themselves as payment. " the ancestor’s h" could be " the ancestors’ h", "know who she is like, " could maybe be "know what she is like, " unless she uses comparisons to people which seems a bit strange but may be the case, in a similar manner "he’d want to know who the other person is" could be "he’d want to know what the other person is" and "; everything can be used strategic applications." could be "; everything can be used for strategic applications.", although this one can probably be improved further. Thanks for writing and I hope you have a great day!

Brandon Anderson

I think you are using a more modern idea of currency where currency is not back by anything but how much people think its work. Copper, silver, gold and Domer pearls would be worth the value of the want / need of the receptive items not buy how much such things could buy you in current market. Minting was more of a certificate that the coin had a certain ratio of these metals and the coin was worth its market value for those metals. First trade instances were always material trade, she should trade her items for their currency use that to buy what her people need. As for an exchange rate between currencies that would come more if they start making allow merchant guilds, whom travel enough to use the others currency, which would be far later in negotiations. Love the story so far.

Nematrec

none of the currencies are new. These are just new *coins*.

Kristjan B

Starting with currency can bit weird. Practically long distance trading would start solely with physical goods. Usually starting with goods that have very different values. Both parties would be looking for something that the other desires and they have abundance of and vice versa. Currency has limited value initially, but disclosing the 'true' value of the traded product can be disadvantageous for trade negotiations. Starting with currency can can work if the intent is to be upfront and honest, but ultimately initial trading is going to be about the material goods that each party can trade and currency naturally follows later.

Abborre

The currency bit isn't bad in itself but maybe its in the wrong place. Maybe it does not fit or maybe put it, the in-depth part, in a later chapter. You could put it as a flashback to the negotiations, or to an earlier part of them.

Squirtle

Once she gets her amazing mind class yeah. I wouldn't be surprised if they liked even just the artistic things that Aly's people make, they are good crafters for a reason. But that would be when they are actually able to fly there with the ship to trade and not have to just rely on Aly just shipping it with her clones lol

Pawzom Lz

Is not the biggest issue here that most of the things they would be interested in is the things Alysara personally makes? While she does indeed like crafting, the needs of a village and a nation are 2 very different things. Maybe in the far off future when she can have more clones something like that will be possible? While she can help them turn Leviathan materials into useful gear for the upcoming war, I doubt she wants to become these peoples personal crafter.

Comiak

that was my plan anyway, the main issue I had was trying to explain the issues while not sounding like a textbook. I may just edit that part to a simple summary to keep it simple.

DANTE

Thanks for the chapter, currency is really difficult to figure and not diving too deeply might be better unless is a major plot point, depending on the amount of commerce you plan to have in the future you might want to settle to a public exchange or the creation of a central exchange that trade bot currency in exchange for a list of material or standard issued items, unless you want to deep dive in how the mint currency skill and works what make a coin legittimate and the intricacies of credit/debot an outline of a somewhat believable solution sound like the best idea

Maury

I mean there is always the option to just fucking barter. that aside, I'm guessing the reason this happened is because they minted a new currency and then assigned value to those coins arbitrarily. on the other hand, the value of the currency on the other continent isn't derived from what the people minting them think they should be worth, but from practical application. pretty much a given that there would be discrepancies when comparing exchange rates. since the new currency probably isn't even in circulation yet, realistically they could adjust the value, but from a diplomatic and bureaucratic standpoint it wouldn't be a good look if recently made decisions are overwritten because it would be admitting that you made a mistake and shows a lack of foresight. another solution would be for them to just use a fiat currency but they don't have that kind of trust at the moment.

Lictor Magnus

I agree with NaughtyPaws, it’s a worthwhile discussion to have, but I don’t think we need to get any deeper into it. A simple “we worked out the currencies after a bit of back and forth” next chapter would be fine.

Squirtle

Confirmed, Governor is a perv

Giperman

Yep. Second half of this chapter is pretty dry. I would prefer a closer look to how Alysara figured out hearing a talking of her clones autonomously and this section shortened to just a couple of the last paragraphs.

NaughtyPaws

Currency/economics can be a deep rabbit hole. May not want to dive into it much unless if becomes a plot point.

Olivier Pascal

Thank you for the chapter! Hope you have a lovely day :D


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