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Chapter 140: The Eyeblight Assassin

🕑 Added 2022-01-14 22:58:32 +0000 UTC

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Comiak

That's plan B.

Demalos

I'm curious as to why the assassin chose to keep the Emperor to breed with the "true lunaleyan heritage" instead of raising one of the many bastards for the role instead. If nothing else, it would allow him to remove the most recent stain on the Emperor's bloodline while still keeping it alive.

Franmeyers

I from down under insert Joie joke here l l l ¥ >btw arrow

Comiak

not sure what timezone you are in but a new chapter will be tomorrow. My schedule is Monday, Wednesday, and Friday.

Franmeyers

Quick question is there gonna be a chapter today?

Tjark

That would indeed be funny. Although sadly the most funny part as in the world announcement is improbable since she didn't really kill him and so shouldn't get the legendary achievement. Although yes she is partly responsible for his death it shouldn't be enough for a legendary achievement.

Pawzom Lz

The funniest scenario I can think of this chapter leading to is that once Aly ends up scouting this place out and tries to get more details, allowing for the assassin to jump over, which leads to his death because he is unable to provide the necessary mana for the sheer distance. She is baffled by the fact that she suddenly gets a world announcement for a kill out of nowhere, no clue how it happened because of how fast he reacts and teleports, nor what skills and such the kill has, meaning she gets a legendary point she cant risk using. Or maybe that the guy ends up in the middle of the ocean. This leads to the question of what happens exactly when someone tries to teleport a distance they do just do not have the mana for? Do the teleport just fail, do they teleport as far as they can or does the spell start to drain health/stamina?

Olivier Pascal

Have a small and silly scene in my mind. " Aly gets fed up and bored at one point and decides to randomly check this empire, assassin thinks its a spy and teleoprts to her location with barely any mana left (long distance and all) and both try to kill each other while both suffering some kind of backlash, aly probably from one of the assassin's skills and the assassin from the distance. "Edit: and at the end of that arc Aly decides to just say I'm done and steal one of the air ships she built to go explore the continent :P

Nematrec

Yae? she's long gone, unlikely to appear in any lunaley stuff.

Sondrex76

Nice chapter! So a legendary assassin who has insta-teleport on anyone observing him, vs a girl with a legendary perception skill. Who just so happens to be of a race whose bloodline will be superior to others of her race, just at the time he seeks a broodmare for his dead friend's bloodline. Oh boy. Then again, I suspect he will respect her more than he does most others, having achieved a legendary point at such a young age, so things may get more complicated than him just trying to force her to mate with the pig. It is good that the people around her are trying to help her with her mental state, although I suspect what she really needs is a friend who is her equal, or one who is greater then her (not like the guardian, since she is so far beyond her and since they're not friends). The assassin could actually end up being that, but with a build so good at countering her, he will probably, at least at first, be a villain, and having a villain that so specifically counters her build will make for an excellent foe. Then again my understanding of other people is rather lacking, so I am probably wrong at my analysis of what she needs. While reading I found a few potential minor misspellings and such. "d Dryads Grace staff, " -> "d Dryad's Grace staff, " " can figure out the plumbing if they tried," -> " could figure out the plumbing if they tried," or " can figure out the plumbing if they try," "e done then; it’s a gre" -> "e done them; it’s a gre" "t far so much it’s cance" -> "t far away so much it’s cance" "st leave it behind like my " -> "st leave behind like my " " as seen fit to grant h" -> " has seen fit to grant h" "ope to go agains" -> "hope to go agains" Thanks for writing and have a great day!

Falxie

Good questions. I don’t think it’s that bad yet but if not addressed these questions will make things hard to follow at some point. Also TFTC. Oh and I bet the assassin wants Aly as soon as he gets to know about her. He conveniently has a class that might be able to force her into doing things she rather wouldn’t do.

DANTE

I don't get why Aly is do preoccupied with fairness for everyone, its getting anoing, the only way to achive wat she see as fair for everyone is to be the tyrant herself or to brainwash everyone in to thinking the same as her. and her spiral of insecurity is transforming in self hatred wich at this point I just skip over, I don't get her character anymore, what's her motivation? why does she do all she is doing for the village if she doesn't like what come out of it? why does she even want a trade route if she doesn't like the consequences or the methods that is required of her to conclude it? why is she obsessed with faines? why is she so upset of the attention others give her, she has a beauty bond, her beauty being recognized should feel like an accomplishment more than anything, why does she make and give staff that change the way of living in the villages if she was happy with the way things were? the only thing she seems to like is messing around with her abilities and study them, why is she constantly doing things that don't satisfy her?

Olivier Pascal

TFTC :D

Venalitor

"but it is your mental state that worries us most. You have a negative view about yourself, Alysara" - Wait, what? Damn, I never got that impression. She's been through some shit, but where'd the negative view of herself come from? What, is it about how she doesn't fit in with many others? BS. Being treated like a divine entity on a pedestal? Definitely. “That’s what I mean, Alysara; most people would be proud of that even if others could have done then(m)" But they are greatly diminished by her other achievements. There's just not as much to them and they're basically just material perks that came along with her skill leveling. "“I’ll forgive her,” I say" - Aww! So wholesome. @ Klaman - Uh oh. And what does 'closest to the true Lunaleyan lineage' mean? 'Cause it sounds very ominous. Particularly for Aly, though mayber her race changes relieve her of that. Edit: wait. . . How will he deal with Nexus environment? Pretty sure Safyr said stronger beings have a harder time adapting.

Squirtle

Tbh... anything thats not that moron of an Emperor is an upgrade. A pig is an upgrade.

Kagaros

For someone who just ranted about bloodline purity being complete bullshit, he's quite seems oddly obsessed with the "pure Lunaleyan" thing. Since atm he knows absolutely nothing about Alysara you would normally just look for a suitable replacement like a distant relative instead of trying to look for a bride

thkiw

I think it would be way more interesting if instead of going against alyserra, he finds that assassin girl.

MazalTan

Please don't go the route of savage Divinity, where the character is always in a perpetual cycle of self hate and degradation. It's not fun for everyone and at this point anytime she looks down at her own accomplishments I just skip whole passages cause they don't serve any point after the 10th time. Savage Divinity was a great novel at the start it used to be my favourite but every time the main character rain seem to improve his mental state it will be immediately digress back, this carries on all the way to chapter 500+ before nearly everyone starts to drop it. At some point a character will get conceited when LITERALLY everyone says they're special and great over and over again. No matter how they feel if they are average or had advantages no one had. I feel that this is dragging this novel down sometimes and her character growth /development is being drag out for no reason.

Giperman

Pretty sure if one of yours power is to teleport to target than you're a space mage and can teleport to set locations anyway. Since system in this book only gives you powers that you can create, I'm pretty sure he didn't bullshit his way through to get teleport ability.

Claus Jørgensen

it is him that teleports to the Nexus so if it works he will have a big problem getting back again. even if he is legendary i dont think he can run on water.

Squirtle

I think looking for someone who is closest to the original 'Lunalayen' from the Assassin's time. So basically, Alysara, minus the tails. And wouldn't you know, she just happens to show up on the island heh. Now he's gonna have to try to convince or force Aly, whom is 15 years old to have children with that, ugly fat dumbass of an "Emperor"... Thats gonna go well

Squirtle

Hmmm.. Maybe Empress is more accurate... whatever

Robert Mullins

I mean, they're the natural counter to her build.

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter

Brandon Anderson

So we have the first real villain and test for Alysara, I doubt he will be able to teleport to her as the distance is huge and he is legendary not mythic. Even if he did mama dragon would be watching if Alysara cant get out of it herself. Is it a theme that Alysara seems to be attracting assassins?

Alphafenrir401

Wait are they looking for someone to give birth to heirs or to simply start a new royal bloodline?

Squirtle

Im assuming it would require him to be have a Legendary tracking skill to even compete with Aly on that front, plus he has to deal with the Guardian being pissed...

Giperman

I don't know what to say about second half of chapter. I hope he win't steal our Alysara for the emperor. Would be fucking stupid.

Reinya

And now Wild Alysara appear!

Squirtle

Another step towards Emperor Goddess Alysara!


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