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Chapter 144: Snow Queen

🕑 Added 2022-01-24 21:22:37 +0000 UTC

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Venalitor

"I will be going back to some early chapters and updating them since this story is getting a lot of traffic recently." - And with good reason. This story is really well done. Speaking of, when's that rewrite of Meta-human happening? Or *is* as the case may be. (joking) Has Aly done anything with beauty of the grand or the terrifying? I bet convincing people she's the serene majesty of a mountain range or the awesome might of a volcanic eruption could be worth a level or two. Broaden her range. Get some destructive beauty in there. Monsters with personality! Now we have something to play off of. Also good for Aly to have someone with nearly no stake to talk to too. Like Safyr, but less short.

Giperman

Yeah, that was out of the blue. Probably serve as foundation for the next chapter, but ended rather abruptly.

Olivier Pascal

Thanks for the chapter! Could you leave in the next chapter notes witch chapters you went back to and changed? Also I don't know if I'm slow or what but I couldn't fully understand the latter half of this chapter with Lotis.

Giperman

I think it's creativity essence for Art.

Okay, so how specific do bonds get? We have metal bonds, but we also have gold bonds, which is a subset of metal, and it would make sense for the metal to be a subset of earth. Is it just random, but with higher probability given the closer the bond is to a basic idea? Also, what's to stop that metal bond from doing everything that a gold bond could? It seems likely that you could have a dream bond (as a subset of mind), but could you have a graceful or Art bond as a subset of beauty? Where does this end? How is it decided what bonds exist?

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Tjark

It would be cool but it's doubtful in the extreme. They are mostly ice fairies living in an environment that Alysara described as possibly the most danger the area has. And the nexus is hot. The runalymo are a race that's adapted to tropical levels of temperature due to the mana arc producing liquid fire mana over the millenia. So the two races can't possibly live in the same environment. Which is sad because the fairies seem really interesting.

Shifty Albert

>Since this story is getting a lot of traffic lately What can I say? I see a pretty cover image, I click it.

SpaceGoddess76

I’m curious if the Fairies can come out of the Dungeon? It would be cool to see if they could form a Community w/Alysara and her people. Would also be cool to meet other sapient Dungeon beings, especially if all of them come to form a massive civilization that combines them all.

Jacqui Andronicos

Thanks for the chapter! Interested in these fairies she has found, seems like it could turn into quite an interesting development. Also, typo at the beginning now -> snow

Jacqui Andronicos

I don't know how he'd find them, all of the villages are still across an immense distance filled with water, and none of them are using a sensing skill on him. Only if he follows Aly back but doesn't reveal himself to both her and the guardian somehow, which seems very unlikely so far.

Lictor Magnus

At first I was thinking the assassin would go after Aly, but now I’m wondering if he’ll find Lotis instead since Aly has a new race.


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