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Chapter 147: The Ball

🕑 Added 2022-02-02 21:24:03 +0000 UTC

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Venalitor

Well, the Ora Ara made complete asses of themselves. I can't help but wonder how Aly saw nothing wrong with Van being so eager to be first to dance with her. The gold family looks damned fine in comparison. The Hova Sera guy did make a good impression though. Still, when does she get around to talking timeframe?

Squirtle

Someone else edits them before posting on RR.

Pawzom Lz

I bet the shimmer she noticed is the Blightwasp Assassin, or the result of a skill of his. He does not strike me as the type to give up, and with him being in charge of an empire, his information network should be quite extensive.

Naoggeddon

Alot more grammar errors on the patreon readings(misused words, spelling, sentence structure) are patreon chapter first draft before royalroadl? Also just wanted to say can't wait for her second class.

Shifty Albert

"Flanurs are a type of boney and hairless monster that scavenges already dead bodies; they roam in packs and are widely known for their circling behavior." This sentence kinda seems like you're talking directly as an author, to me at least. It's a bit jarring.

HighterDK

Good things end too fast. Gotta wait til friday now.

Charles Owens

"to meet your acquaintance" should be if your friend is introducing someone new. "to make your acquaintance" should be if you are meeting someone new without an introducer.

Squirtle

I believe its "to make"

Squirtle

Has nothing to do with the bond itself for me, it's just that they're annoying people. I don't blame them for wanting to get information for their, but they're just annoying lol. At least the sister can tell when Aly didn't want to be offered marriage lmao

Giperman

Probably has the same concept of damage as beauty bond. Maybe supression too

Pawzom Lz

The Law bond might just be the most interesting bond introduced so far. I cant help but wonder how it works?

Atigasgas

I think "I'm pleased to meet your aquintance" should be "to make", though now that I'm writing it, I'm not so sure anymore. Perhaps I've heard it wrong all my life :(

Comiak

the red one, Fydrao.

Olivier Pascal

Don't judge people with a beauty bond so quickly. Other people don't have the advice of a bond classed dragon and there could be other ways of using the beauty bond without getting social maters into the mix. But I do agree, I do hate these people, social climbers the lot of them

Pawzom Lz

Which one? Theres 3 :P

Squirtle

Blah, I already hate these people, especially the beauty bond peeps

Robert Mullins

In before Safyr randomly decides to fly her to the moon.


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