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Late notice and updated cover

🕑 Added 2022-02-04 02:46:16 +0000 UTC

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Jeanean

Just noticed, but Royal road is still using the old version for the cover.

Rd Zg

@Nobody Where

Rd Zg

There's 5

Nobody

She did say she would stop at 9.

Benjamin Powell

Is it just me or do I count 4 tails in that picture…

MadGod

This is good! Now she actually looks like Alysara, not just some random kitsune art.

Crashdevil

I wouldn't call them that, but you do make a good point about pushing our perspective on a literal alien species.

Pawzom Lz

The issue is that they are subconsciously thinking about things from the perspective of our species, with what looks natural for us, not considering how different things could be for an entirely different species, in a different world, with stats and skills that changes them(str and endurance would remove backpain due to big bust size as an example). For crying out loud, they are complaining about the ears and bust being too big and unnatural when this is a species with fennec fox like ears(really large ears, look them up) and tails(4 in this case). These people are retarded, just ignore them.

Crashdevil

I'm pretty sure the change in he bust size was made to reflect how she's described in the story. I don't really see what the issue is.

Vangelis Theodoratos

I think smaller ears and bust are more natural

Falxie

Hope your mom gets well soon! I like the ear size change and the improved detail on the roofs/window. The change on the tail is nice though the old one was fine too imho. I really don’t like the new bust size, it looks weird on her. The slightly smaller size she had in the old one looks more natural and “fitting” while in the new picture she looks like having implants. The added house in the background is an improvement, makes the picture feel like it has more depth than before.

Olivier Pascal

Here's to hopin' everything ends up well

Venalitor

Ooh, I didn't notice the clones in the background before. Or are they new? Regardless, nice detail. With the four tails, I kinda thought this was when she was twenty.

Ex Caseus Fortis

Best wishes for your mother, and for yourself.

Squirtle

Hope she gets better!

SDCard

Thanks for the info, I hope your mom will improve soon. About the artwork: Honestly I couldn't care less about small inaccuracies, I absolutely love it