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The Heart Grows Ch. 180
🕑 Added 2025-02-20 07:11:42 +0000 UTCA check-in with the army on their march, and then the reveal to a populace who their new champion is. I'm sure everything will go fine.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kPsDEHQZKBP2NsCl3PeQUMEStK8rjcHYGAsKOKBPeJE/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Damaged
You could imagine it, though. Flying along, temps are about half what they are at ground level—suddenly a warm breeze pouring up around you like a cozy blanket, and all you need to do it balance on your wings and it will keep flowing.
Damaged
There would be many thousands packed into that city square. Probably bordering on 10x more people there than "monsters" in Breeze.
Damaged
Nope. That's her not continuing. Maybe I should put a note there.
HereForHFY
Heart is going to do great things! is there a missing bit here?: They murmur my name and they sound
Purpleninja
Lovely! Some of the edit suggestions are weird as usual. "Is this implying there are more people in polfay than creatures in Breeze", no, it said "more PEOPLE than she's seen before." And yes it meant People not creatures, and yes there is more than a 'population of zero' "people" in Breeze. Like, we Just had a chapter that showed us Breeze has nearly 1,000 workers. C'mon. Where do you think the dryad came from
Andrew Denton
It's a small thing, but I'm tickled by the characterization of updrafts as "cozy".
